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Last Updated: 4/13/03

 

 

Posted By: Tom S.: tom12@yahoo.com

I loved "The Story" and I think it should be made into a movie, which would be an excellent vehicle to expose Neo Tech to the world. The world needs Neo Tech! "The Story" integrated the Neo Tech philosophy into a very warm, loving story. Thank you for this. I am a previous owner of Neo Tech literature, but was not ready for it 10 years ago. I am NOW!

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Posted By: Laurie B (Laurie@aol.com)

Dear Mr. Hamilton, I love your characters in The Story. Ms Annabelle is wonderful and so are her 12 children. Many have asked you to make this into a move but I want to ask if there are any neo-tech schools to send our children to? If this is supposed to be a true story, can I get a copy of Ms. Annabelle's tapes for my children. I am a 26 year old mother of 2 boys who's IQ soars. They are 6 and 4 years old and I don't want them corrupted by society's illusions. If there is no school, can we start one? Please let me know.

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Posted By: R. Michael (dms@raex.com)

I would like to see "The Story" made into a movie or even a mini series followed by a weekly TV show.

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Posted By: user48.jakinternet.co.uk

The story knocked my socks off. It seems to crystallize through simplicity and clarity the very ideals that we all look for but are too distracted or ignorant to access. "The Story" has definitely got my motor running. Many Thanks and Kind Regards, ps. I can contribute $1000 to any movie project

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Posted By: Mistaken Profit (24-216-201-14.hsacorp.net)

I have no skills in the movie making process but I would happily be an investor to the right producing company endorsed by Mark. Someone email me if this comes about so I can contribute my capital to this venture. One of Hundreds maybe Thousands

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Hi Mark; absolutely brilliant, when can we expect to see the film.

Every Success

Andy

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Posted By: killairne (spider-wq082.proxy.aol.com)

I am still interested in the investment of $$$, and more valuable, time for a project of bringing THE STORY to a worldwide marketable movie. I am sincere and passionate about my interest in bringing THE STORY to the anticiv and perhaps initiating the critical mass "conversion" predicted by NT authors. We are talking about the stopping of this planet's self-destruction. Forget about the philosophical YADA YADA! Let's get some action going for the saving of the earth so we can evolve into the CofU. IMO THE STORY is the most potent potential message of waking up the population to the anticiv. Please join me in promoting this as a worldwide HIT in the cinematic spectrum.

Please email me for investors and coordinators. I nominate myself for the advisory board. I am multitalented and extremely energetic (thank zon I grew up before ritalin was used. I'd be a in a mystical bubble, floating around, today.) Again, thanks Mr. Hamilton for your epiphany. My honestly warm regards, Killy

PS A metaphor from my past reborn Christian days, "If a train is heading toward a friend on the tracks, one most likely races to remove the friend from danger." That is how I feel about getting this movie made.

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Posted By: Jeremiah G (cnuck@netscape.net)

I am only on Chapter 6. Delayed reading more than the first chapter until today. Wow! It sends chills up the spine. Once you get into it, and get to know the characters, the message is very powerful on an emotional level.

I can't wait to read the rest.

Just a thought on the movie version ;-) Michelle Pfeiffer <-- main character Louis Gossett Jr. <-- the janitor Oprah Winfrey <-- janitor's wife (she'll slim down for the part) Matthew Broderick <-- college student (he can still pass for one) Kevin Spacey <-- pip squeak guidance counselor cameos Howard Stern <-- abusive husband (flashback scene) seriously, he could play evil version of himself

Maybe instead of a movie, it could become a TV serial, like how they converted Stephen Kings Golden Years into 1 hour a week episodes.

With the flashbacks and the time span dealt with in The Story it reminds me of the story of Reuben Hurricane Carter. That movie is a must see.

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Posted By: Paul D

Dear Mark, to give you insight on the supremacy of "The Story", allow me to tell you that in my four years in Saudi Arabia, more than two decades ago, I read all the English books in Abqaiq, Radhwa, Juaimah, three libraries! Not one of the best sellers can come close to the intimacy I had with the Neo-Tech characters in the book. The story burn my heart, even now, its been two weeks since I finished reading "The Story". The eloquence of the story was simplicity, honesty and mirror the real life of today. I would be surprise if it is not a real story! Fiction can not even approximate the reality from beginning to end. This is the story that is meant for a movie, so every lazy people who don't want to read or even people who does not know how to read, would know who are the neocheaters!

Paul D

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Posted By: Raquel F r@pressenter.com

This is so amazing! The Story is changing my life as I read it. I can now feel positive about my life and my children's lives. I am going to teach them everything I know about the Civilization of the Universe and Neothink, as did Miss Annabelle with her students. I am going to grab every teachable moment with them. I have bow found something to integrate into their lives, something that is true. "The Story" is so powerful and so true I have seen it happen in my life and others around me, it is so exciting and invigorating to see. I am ready to vote a Neo-Tech President into office to embrace the Civilization of the Universe.

I feel so lucky, because I am a 21 year old mom and my oldest is 6 and my youngest is 4. I made my way through high school and I started college this year. What a gift you have given, and will continue to give! I am behind you 100%!

If you make a movie, I would love to play Miss Annabelle, I think her Character is so great, and I would love to be a Miss Annabelle for my children and many other children because to spread the truth like she did is what I have been doing, only on a much smaller scale with my daughter and her friends! Go Neo-Tech!

It is so important for the future of not only my children but all the children in the world! I would love too see my children grow up in the Civilization of the Universe, and myself too!

The truth has finally been set free, and it makes me so happy! I no longer have to live the anticivilization lie! I love You Guys!

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Posted By: host-209-214-92-93.bct.bellsouth.net

I really enjoyed the story and have spent the past 2 days

Reading it at your website, what a beautiful world without external authorities to keep us down. I think it would make a great movie, teaching presented as entertainment. Keep up the good work.

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Posted By: Nicolas <nicola81@caramail.com (194.57.181.252)

Dear Friends,

"The Story" could be a great movie, as NeoBaj said.

I think that I'd be delighted if a film was made from Mr Hamilton's book. I think too that I'm not the only one who thinks so.

Neither I nor most of the regular people know how to make a film. On the other hand, many people, including me, own about 200 $ on their bank account that they do not really need (which are not a vital necessity).

So, I do this offer :

If someone is capable of making a movie from Mr. Hamilton's book, and that Mr. Hamilton allows that person to do so, then I'm going to provide 200 $ to finance the project.

What ? 200 $ to make a film ? You must think that I'm kidding. But please carry on reading, and you will understand my idea.

Neo Tech means "fully integrated honesty". So, if Mr. Hamilton allowed someone to make a film from his book, we could trust that person, couldn't we ?

The problem is that a lot of money is needed to produce a film. But, as The Story is a great story, it would be a great movie and financial success, wouldn't it ?

We Neo Tech readers are convinced of the value of The Story. We aren't rich enough (yet...) to finance the whole project. But Neo Tech is sold all around the world, and has got millions of customers. If one hundred of them gave 200 $, 20 million dollars would be available. And once the movie would be produced and broadcast, the production could pay back all the small shareholders.

Now, consider the risk : - if the project fails, you will lose 200 $ + if the project succeeds, you will lose nothing, and Neo-Tech ideas will become available to the entire world through a pleasant, exciting film.

What do you think of that ?

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The Story: Great Movie!

Posted By: NeoBAJ (dialup-63.210.143.boston1.level3.net)

Finally, I'm done reading "The Story". What a wonderful book of science-fiction. I must admit it's better than "The Matrix". Reading "The Story" allow me to see the big picture of the Neo-World.

At first, it wasn't easy for me to 'swallow' the story because I was trying to read it with my left brain(the same way I would read "The Neo-Tech Discovery" or "Think and Grow Rich"). After a few weeks of break, I realized I had to approach this book with the same state of mind I would use to read "Star Wars" or "The Apocalypse".

This book is made for the movies (I wouldn't mind writing the script, Mark). My conclusion: This is the most positive prediction of the future I've ever read.

NeoBAJ

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The Story

Posted By: richard s (user-33qs0ud.dialup.mindspring.com)

Mr. Hamilton: The Story is fantastic!!! I haven't finished all of it yet. So far it has taken me on an incredible emotional roller-coaster ride. I have never had this kind of reaction to a story, not even Braveheart, which is my all time favorite movie, the only movie that I ever shed tears to.

The only complaint I have is trying to figure the puzzle. I like a challenge, but this is killing me. Phantom-Bantom Software, Winter Wonderland, etc. Throw me a bone please. Is Ms. Annabelle, Katherine Applegate?

Well keep up the good work & keep an eye on your 6.

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What Can I Say

Posted By: Howie Healey (ipnak1-c4.xtra.co.nz)

What can I say, most of you have described Mark Hamilton's The Story" spot on.

I liked the analogy of equaling the roller coaster emotional tide one felt in Braveheart as these value producers from NT bring us that battle cry of FREEEEEEEEEEDOM, love and away with the tyranny of the anti-civilization.

Much of the story I felt reflected the lives of individual value producers from early Neo-Tech. And the early struggles of Miss Annabelle put on by the neo-cheaters in politics reflects the early struggles of Dr. Wallace as both fought the anti-civilization corruption and ego-justice dogma.

The Story gave me more satisfaction than Ayn Rand's Fountainhead. And that's saying something. Rand's works were very powerful riveting messages and MH went beyond that.

The significant part for me was the meeting up years later of the original class and their teachers Miss Annabelle and Mr. Melbourne. Mind blowing stuff.

And the further integration of these rich and powerful neo-think minds into curing the aging process, the election of the NT party, and the added value of Operation 111 leaves one to ponder, if the early story reflects so much of early Neo-Tech, how much of the latter story reflects the current and future prospects of Neo-Tech and the C of U.

How quickly are we as prospective Zons going to see that future come true? I say the momentum is picking up a great deal, and I guess it's up to each one of us to contribute. Watch this space.

All I can say is, when is the movie coming out? It will surpass Titanic, Ben Hur, and the Matrix by far.

The exposure and the revenue generated from that will be more than enough to get FRW elected into office.

And I expect the Neo-Thinking minds will be working on it.

Nine out of 10 in my view. Can't wait for the next one.

Howie

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Posted By: Brad C (cache.odyssey.on.ca)

You should make "The Story" into a movie, it would be a sure hit, and think of all the lives it could touch and change.

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Posted By: Jack D. Owens (usr39-dialup49.mix2.Atlanta.cw.net)

Just got done reading The Story, so powerful. Is there anyway that it will be made into a movie format? By the end of the story I didn't want to leave that world. Thank you for sharing the picture with me, it has change my life forever.

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Posted By: Tim A (TimA@webtv.net)Subject: The Story

I am in the middle of reading The Story. It's brilliant. I feel that this story should be made into a movie. In my opinion, this Story is the perfect introduction to Neo-Tech for the masses.

By coincidence, I happen to be a twenty-two year old college student and would be interested in playing the part of Jake. A long shot, but worth a try.

Zoncerely

Tim A

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Posted By: JGM (mjmcan@northpro.net)

I just had to send you another compliment on this publication. This story is awesome. This is really something new, different, and exciting. It really gets down to practical application of the NT philosophy. I have noticed from my participation on lists with other NTers that many of the newbies are constantly asking for examples of practical application. Well, I believe that you have really done that with this story.

I have been speed reading with a vengeance for the past three evenings and I am totally into this story! You have presented so many of your concepts in a way that should be receptive to a vast majority of people out there. That is absolutely essential in order to spread the word to the majority of people. I definitely think that you are on the right track here. This is great work in progress.

I would also like to repeat my request from last night. Please publish this gem. I want to own a bound volume of this publication. I can not wait to sit down with my son and read this with him. It is Neo-Tech in a very digestible nutshell! Now, back to my reading!!

JGM

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Posted By: "David A. K (kekih@cablecomm-pa.com)

Thank you so much for "The Story". I'm almost finished with it but had to send you this email even before I finished.

First of all, the book is outstanding. That's actually an understatement. It's uplifting, inspirational, educating and a very easy, captivating read. Everyone from age 9-90 should have a copy. It could simply change the world.

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Posted By: Andy D (willgreaper@hotmail.com)

Dear Mr. Hamilton, I read "The Story" and found it to be every bit as enlightening, provocative and effective in teaching the basics of integrated thinking and outlining objective philosophy as Ayn Rand's "Atlas Shrugged." As a parent, it is one of my highest objectives to raise my son to the best of my ability. In order to do this, I feel it is necessary to teach him the why of the scientific method, and the reasons behind the US Bill of Rights. I have a two year old son that would benefit greatly from a book like the fictional one written by the character of Ms. Annabel, "How to raise a genius with five minute bedtime stories." I would greatly appreciate any information that you could provide on this subject and would like to know if a book like that been written? And if not, is one in the planning or writing stage? Congratulations on a well crafted story.

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Posted By: Mark W (ip15.ann-arbor4.mi.pub-ip.psi.net)

"The Story" is a good conceptualization of NT with real life. It would make a good movie, even an old-fashioned radio drama. I have often thought that when internet access gets faster and the right software comes along, anyone, with a fast computer, a good video camera, can turn their home or business into a broadcasting studio that can have live 24 hours a day broadcasts to the world just like any of the networks. Can you imagine having an unlimited number of "channels" to surf? How about millions of online auctions for goods and services? Talk about competition!

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The Story

Posted By: Howie (user-33qs18c.dialup.mindspring.com)

Mark,

As predicted, fantastic stuff, and I have put my comments on NTN13.

Can't wait until the next one, and how soon until the movie? As I commented to Ted, (Fox). Steven Speilberg as director or NZ's very own Roger Donaldson.

You guys are something else and your Dad, well, the words have not been invented, to describe this great value producing individual. You guys are going from strength to strength. FRW has been my and millions of others Miss Annabelle.

I want to wish your group every success in project life and if there is anything I can do, let me know.

A NT friend in Aussie and myself are contributing Web Sites to NT. Mine will be on www.business-prosperity.com and www.asia-pacific.com. We are negotiating with web designers now. That will be our contribution to NT. The main focus on our sites will of course be Neo-Tech and will have direct links to www.neo-tech.com

Any information that does not appear on your neo-tech site, for example promotions on political aspirations and information on project life that you may feel will be of use to consumers in this part of the world. Please send to us and we will include that info on our web page.

Once we are satisfied with the final outcome of our contribution to NT, we will be promoting those pages in local newspaper advertising, for people to log on and learn something that will change their thinking from the current coercive, believe in higher authority stagnant mentality into the neo-thinking.

The end result will be, well it's written in the last chapters of "the Story".

Well done and congratulations.

Sincerely

Howie

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Posted By: Barbara S (fan@onlink.net)

Mark

I'm sitting here with tears on my face trying to type. I have just finished reading Chapter 36. It only took me 8 hours, I could not stop reading...I ignored my housework and most everything around me except my child.

I believe that Chapter 36 pulled it together neatly. I was pulled emotionally so many times by the story. The neo-cheaters, the liars, the manipulators...scary stuff...reminds me of today's world. Slowly it is changing but it will take some time and some mindsets will not be able to handle the changes but they have a choice...become value creators and integrators or die. How wonderful it would be to live in a world where the values created are not torn down or ridiculed.

Every chapter I read had something else of value to add my life. It was like turning on the light switches. AMAZING!!!

Thank you for your story...but one question...is it a story or perhaps a vision of what will be?? I sense some characters are stronger than others. I feel that they are actual persons today or have been influences in your life.

Barbara S

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Posted By: Jason (raleigh-ip-1-56.dynamic.ziplink.net)

Just like to say that Mark Hamilton and Dr. Wallace are geniuses. I'm reading The Story which I'm loving. I never want to finish reading this book although eventually I will. This book is the key to becoming not only your potential but is also the key to all knowledge. This book continues to amaze me and the pieces of the puzzle are snapping together like clock work. Mark is one of the best authors I have ever read and knows how to make his points clear. Thanks again Mark for showing me the way.

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Posted By: Rufus John W (p33-140.atnt1.dialup.sat1.flash.net)

This is the best story I have ever read. Thank You, Rufus, age73.

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Posted By: caf (central.mpl.org)

As I was reading a book on Dr. Laura it occurred to me that she almost was a real life Ms. Annabelle. She was socially not integrated, when she was teaching she lived for her students, she even taped her sessions with a client, feeling that the client would get more out of it by listening to the tapes. She explored science and was a loner. On and on. The book is by Vickie Banes. Dr. Laura it appears is Neo-Tech. What do you think?

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Posted By: Tonia w (NYCMA010-0767.splitrock.net )I love the "The Story". I could not put the book down..

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Posted By: Garwin E R. (ip176.an19-new-york4.ny.pub-ip.psi.net)

Mark, I have read most of everything you have written in the last ten years, and have always been supremely happy with the values delivered, but you have struck "pure gold" with this book, and have made it not only easy but enjoyable to warm one's attention of involvement with Neo-Think.

Well done, kudos, kudos, KUDOS.

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Riveting

Posted By: David k (kp@hotbot.com)

I haven't enjoyed reading something so much since The Book. It is now 3:20 a.m. and it is only out of shear exhaustion that I stop. I would like to personally thank you for this story and many others. My only wish is that everyone could get their hands on this information. Please continue spreading the truth (honesty)!

Sincerely,

Dave

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Posted by: JGM (inflow-182.pool.northpro.net)

I think that you have hit on a good idea with "The Story." I am through Chapter 12, I hope that you are planning on publishing this. I would like to be able to savor this as well as read it with my 16 year old son. It is a great read that embodies your philosophy in a manner that can be understand by many more than those of us who already grasp your philosophy. Please publish this and I will be sure to order.

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In Awe

Posted By: killairne j (user-33qs09l.dialup.mindspring.com)

I am in awe over The Story. I had constant tears of joy, frustration and empathy throughout this eloquent account of the anticivilization and the Civilization of the Universe. Thank you Mark Hamilton. You have written the ultimate epiphany. I hope this is what will transpire.

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Powerful

Posted By: Jason D (user-33qs1jd.dialup.mindspring.com)

The Story is one of your most powerful creations yet. I've Never read anything like it. I couldn't stop reading it. I was moved by the characters and their thoughts. This story made me think about so many things, my childhood, my family, my future. I would give almost anything to have had a teacher like Miss Annabelle. It would have helped me understand why I resisted authority as a child. I could have avoided so much pain if I had known then what I know now. Its like learning to speak a new language, its so much easier to pick up as a child than it is as an adult. But it can be done. The same holds true for neo-think. I want to thank you for sharing this great value. I feel I owe you something for it. If you ever publish this story I will buy it! I hope you do. I think it could be the tool I need to open the door to neo-tech and spark the interest of my friends and loved ones. I would like to see more stories like this. I thank you again and keep up the excellent work!

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Posted By: Mike (user-33qs0pl.dialup.mindspring.com)

In Response To: The Story (mike cMi)

Has anyone out there read the incredible new NT work, the work that eclipses all previous works....The Story?

Now I liked Atlas Shrugged, but this thing just blows it away from an excitement and emotional perspective, as well as the broad scope of it... It is not only one of the most highly integrated NT works ever, but In my opinion, the most emotionally profound. It is also the most easily accessible product for the hard-working man in the street. It's something that down-to-earth people can really relate to... I predict that this publication will not only be the big crossover product that captures the general public, but I also predict it could be the most financially profitable from the stand point of people voluntarily GIVING whatever they can afford to pay for the product. I know that I feel compelled to give them something ,if for no other reason than they brought out special feelings I hadn't felt in years.

I suspect that others may feel the same .

ke CPo

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Posted By: mike c T (user-33qs19n.dialup.mindspring.com)

Goddamn "The Story" is awesome! It kicks extreme ass! I've Read through about six chapters and it's rekindled feelings I had not felt for years... The pure radiant innocence of this is incredible! I think this could be the big crossover point that finally gets the NT concepts to the masses in a digestible form. I'm getting thoughts like "is this for real?" and "don't worry-happiness in the universe is inescapable" I realize that this "civilization" is a pretext for slavery; not obvious slavery, but a slow, piecemeal, debilitating slavery where the "authorities" keep the forces of production at just enough to sustain the masses, neither completely killing the populace nor allowing full blown prosperity. Man, those neocheaters are incredible bastards.

My heart went out to miss Annabelle and those kids. I had feelings of wanting to beat up those idiots on the school board. She and those children should have been protected at all costs.. Unlike Rand ,this story while retaining the same positive sense of life as that book had if not more so, was written from a male perspective, and thus sir, you have created one of the most intensely sexually attractive characters I've ever seen in Miss Annabelle. It would be a crime not to include some pornographic element.(I say this not in a crude way, but in a "deliciously vulgar" way that justifies and validates the characters sense of life..)

Also being in a story format, and being based on contemporary issues I consider this to be the first "book" in the Bible of God-Man. The Bible was also based on what was then contemporary issues and used parables to educate . I can't wait until the real people the story was based on, become disclosed. Thanks Wallace for such a valuable writing.. It will give hope to all the good people in the world . I ought to send in payment, and will if you need it. (BTW I'm glad you shut down the forum of losers formerly known as neo-talk -they haven't been missed)hanks Mike "the Rev" C.Po

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Posted By: mike c. (user-33qs19n.dialup.mindspring.com)

Mark. Hamilton, Mike here again.... I've already submitted my comments on "The Story" a few days ago. I was on chapter 6 then, and now I'm on chapter 30. At this point I feel compelled to say that I think that it is the most brilliant thing I have ever read. As a long time NT "associate" of sorts, I didn't think there was anything you guys could do that would shock me, but I was wrong. This thing will shake the guts out of anyone who thought of themselves as NT people as well as all the good hardworking people who haven't been exposed to NT before. It was incredible how you have seamlessly integrated every important NT concept and advantage as well as the experiences of Nov.3rd into a highly enjoyable and readable narrative... (I didn't realize that this had happened until about chapter 21.) Don't expect this to be the last you hear of me about this incredible work, for the more I read the more I feel like shouting out how great it is! Thks again, Mike "the Rev" C.

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Re: Powerful

Posted By: mike m (hmax3.dyn162.ky.us.dynastyonline.net)

An interesting realization that I've come to, is that these people in the Story, while factually based recreations, DO represent what is available to us NOW! They too started off in the anticivilization, yet when they started expunging personal mysticism, they entered the C. of U. ,through injecting their natural creativity in society. This was particularly true of the children ,as they BEGAN with much less mysticism and therefore had less obstacles to be overcome. That Teddy Winters; man! The thought of a nine year old running a national ,million dollar business.. Can you imagine the pride his Dad and Miss Annabelle must have felt? That gave me hope and showed me the way things SHOULD be in society. Also near the end of the story, the death of Martin ... that was one of the most touching parts of the story. An innocent man with the best of hopes and intentions, courageous enough to be a pioneer to help save himself and everyone else, struck down by the inane stupidity of death.... that point really struck home..

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Entering the Super Society!

Posted By: Chris M (1cust117.tnt23.lax3.da.uu.net)

Mark Hamilton's the story is phenomenal. It is the best work of art I have ever come across. I was excited and emotional through out my reading, and my mind couldn't stop wondering off with ideas and integrating new concepts.

I had been worried and pissed off at no signs of the establishment collapsing due to a Y2K a crisis, and not to mention where the business and prosperity party stood with the NOV 2000 elections. But after reading the story and book 1, I now have nothing to worry about... knowing that we are so close to the civilization of the universe.

Mark Hamilton has definitely made the leap into the God-Man mentality, it is now down to the rest of us to make that leap by identifying our Friday night essence so we can start creating a technological paradise. I have known for a long time what my Friday night essence is, but to hear Mark Hamilton mention it in that way has got me excited all over again.

Thank you Mark Hamilton and NTP, for the renewed motivation and confidence injected into my being. I am with you all the way.

To every one in the anticivilization, it is time to restrain the forces of nature once and for all, overcome it by keeping it real as conscious beings. This includes all pip squeaks, shysters, beady eye monsters, slackers, killers, players, player haters, the entire parasitical elites. Please recognize that the end is nigh, and you can still save yourselves and live in the technological paradise ... its not too late. Become God-Man and quit being Dog-Man. Peace!

Forever integrating honestly

Chris.

Bring on the Bloodless revolution!

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Up to 11

Posted By: NeoBAJ (01-036.024.popsite.net)

Chapter 11 That's where I am so far; the book is certainly attractive and sure seems to wake that sleeping child in me. But yet I'm just starting to read it(24 chapters left). I found myself asking questions that were launching my imagination and creativity. For example when Jake asked himself: "What is the common denominator in that third-grade classroom?", I tried to find the answer; I stooped reading and started pacing in my room thinking:

What is the common denominator in that third-grade classroom?

-They were all happy to learn, to discover new things.

But why?

-Because they realize their whole life is about living their dreams! Because they had a strong desire to realize their dream, by doing so create incredible values for humanity. They wanted to make a difference in the world!

But how did it happen that this desire was so strong in them(and not in the other kids)?

-Well at some point they all realized how important life is, how important they are as human beings! The other kids probably started to buy into the mystic idea that they're worthless.

Great but is that all? I mean is that the common denominator or could we try to look deeper? What made them see the importance of their lives?

-Oh yes! They were all self-thinkers in that class! They were challenged to think for themselves. They were not memorizing pre-built concepts(naiveté), but actually using their mind to build new concepts! They were discovering what is under the shadow of what seems, thus that feeling of happiness, fullfillness like the one I'm feeling right now!

Believing that I got it, a feeling of satisfaction and passion for life passed through me. Yeah, that's HAPPINESS!

I found in Chapter 9 an excellent example of how to deal with a mystic mind(even my own for that matter).

Just starting! NeoBAJ

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Children's bedtime stories

Posted By: Lee H. (th-pm03-49.ndirect.co.uk)

I am enjoying reading the story immensely I have felt myself brought almost to tears in parts (e.g.. the part where the innocent children were asked to tell how much they enjoyed time with Miss Annabelle, which they thought would help her, only to have their innocent comments used out of context to incriminate her) I think ' The Story ' will switch a lot of brains on !! The reason I am writing this is that my son is 21 months old and I would love to see him become a great value producer, and I was excited about the idea of telling him bed-time stories about great value producers and if there is any one out there who could write a few and post them up on the net that would be great. I would also like to get a book of 5 minute lectures like the ones the children are exposed to I could give my son. Any one out there have any good thoughts on this. All the best Lee

Keep integrating.....keep yourself honest.......look through to the essence of things.....always ask yourself who is the value producer...who is the value destroyer ?.....eat more protein and less carbohydrates.......go after your dreams........keep track of the numbers.......keep yourself aerobically fit.......find romantic love........outcompete others.....use the mini day/power thinking tool everyday........don't stagnate/drive projects through.......LIVE YOUR LIFE THE WAY YOU WANT TO LIVE IT.

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Helps me share Neo-Tech

Posted By: Ricardo L (user-33qs19r.dialup.mindspring.com)

I'm on chapter 24 of The Story and I can't stop. I have read most of your books and really like them, but this one helps me put the basics into other members of my family in an easier way.

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The Story

Posted By: Robert K (user-33qs1f9.dialup.mindspring.com)

Mark, This is a very powerful story. It reached me emotionally in a way that no other Neo-Tech literature has done. I found myself in tears at points in the story. It seemed that certain emotional blocks in my life were being broken through. I find myself valuing life and hating death at more of an emotional level as a result of your story. Thanks, Rob K.

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Thank you is not enough

Posted By: MATHIEU G (user-33qs1f9.dialup.mindspring.com)

Mr. Hamilton,

First, let me say that everything I've read from you is nothing but great. I recently ordered 6 more books, including your Hot Tips and Business Cosmic Control. I know even before I get them, that they will give me value 100 hundred times their price.

Due to my busy schedule, I have never taken the time to write to Neo-tech about the value of their books until now. I was refraining from writing a positive testimonial because the testimonial isn't even close to being finished. But, your latest creation "The Story" has really changed me in many ways.

I first read Neo-tech when I was 16. It was a shock, but after re-reading it 3 more times, I knew the book was the revelation of "what is". I have since read many publications online and have been struggling to find my way out of the anticivilization to the next level of God-Man. I can honestly say that I was getting closer after travelling abroad and finding my way out of extremely high stress situations, but "The Story" has given me, what I believe is the needed boost, that will catapult me into the God-Man level.

Every move I make writes my autobiography in my head. I'm writing "The Story" in my head, MY STORY. And it is similar in many aspects to the stories of your characters in "The Story". I never had the mentor I needed. I always sought those who we're above me, who knew more since they were the fastest way to the highest level. Now, I feel the characters in "The Story" are my mentors.

I want to thank you tremendously for that valuable book. I definitely look forward to reading many more of your books.

Take care, Matt G.

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A teacher like Miss Annabelle

Posted By: Alan L (user-33qs1jd.dialup.mindspring.com)

In my 54 plus years of reading, this has been the most profound, eye-opening literature I've ever read. A positive step for human-kind. Neo-Tech should definitely be taught in schools. I wish I had had a teacher like Miss Annabelle instead of one like Ms. Minner!!

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Hell Yeah

Posted By: JP (user-33qs19n.dialup.mindspring.com)

The Story is the most powerful thing I've read on this Web site-A big "Hell Yeah!!"

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Artwork

Posted By: Willie S (user-33qs19n.dialup.mindspring.com)

Thank you Mr. Hamilton for the life rendering artwork called "The story". It has moved and touched my heartstrings of life.

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Posted By: Ladar (Ladar@powerweb)

I think this story is very psychuous! It gave me tingling sensations throughout my nervous system. It taught me the fundamentals of common denominators and how they get to the essence of happiness.

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Posted By: Jacqueline S (ip176.an19-new-york4.ny.pub-ip.psi.net)

Mark, The Story is majestic. All the while my mind elevated and I kept seeing a reflection of myself just as I were 25 years ago. I felt as though that child in me was being resurrected! The Story is sincerely a masterpiece contribution to the world. The Story IS the fulfillment and essence of Neo-Tech.

Jacqueline

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Posted By: chris w (ip176.an19-new-york4.ny.pub-ip.psi.net)

Your novel The Story was the most incredible book I have ever read. I am a 23 year old male, and I have to admit that there were several parts in the book that brought tears to my eyes - tears of joy!!! By integrating other Neo-Tech works into this novel, it made my understanding of the philosophy so much more powerful. I have studied Neo-Tech for about 5 years now and see neocheaters everywhere I look. This novel helped me to realize that so many incredible things are possible if we dump the anti-civilization that we live in today. I have a couple of questions for you sir. First, how can I find out more about RIBI and their efforts to rid this planet of the biggest disease known to man - aging?? How can I send them a donation? I am working day and night on building a business, and there is nothing I would rather do with some of my profits then put them towards a great endeavor such as biological immortality.

Thanks again for writing this unbelievable novel. Have an awesome day!!!

 

Chris W

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Posted By: Fred L (yros@ilhawaii.net)

Right now I am in Chapter 23 of The Story, still being amazed by the story about Miss Annabelle and Mr. Melbourne. I'm reading about the two of them in prison and how they are coping with life. So far this book is simply amazing how it is written and how it makes one think how false life is. It makes you believe more in the way philosophers think vs the way life is. How false our lives really are but that all one has to do is free oneself to trust in oneself because we are all Gods. But how corrupted man can be just to be in control over another. Ego can be a bad thing and life can be forever, but the way society tries to influence one into believing that they are right and man has no other way to think. Thank you so much for writing this book.

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Patent # 4,666,425

Posted By: Bob (adsl-63-195-240-190.dsl.sndg02.pacbell.net)

Believe it or not, a patent search did come up with Patent#4666425 and it's title is:

"Device for perfusing an animal head", which can be tied to a book called "If we can keep a severed head alive...", about lopping off a head and keeping it mechanically alive.

It's from the late 80's.

http://164.195.100.11/netacgi/nph-

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Posted By:: Mk S (rightshot@yahoo.com)

I don't know about the Darwin evolution part, but after reading the STORY....all I could do for the next few minutes was...sit in front of this computer screen and quietly & happily....clap...clap...clap....clap...clap...clap...clap...clap...clap...clap...clap...clap....honestly...I couldn't stop as I reflected on the last thoughts & words of Miss Annabelle:

"So, back to what I said earlier, do not get confused by what you might hear about how love should be. The mixed-up world around you will take away your nature as man and woman. For instance, do not listen to that women lib talk. That talk is the first to balk at the idea of a woman giving herself to a man in an intimate relationship. Women's lib causes millions of women to deny their nature, which takes away the deepest happiness in a woman's life of being in love with a man she can look up to and admire, a man she can surrender to. Of course, girls, remember you can go as far as any man in any career, but your husband must be someone special -- that productive man you can look up to."

Something inside me had reached a cord! (For I've always known this to be true)

I look forward to reading the other material further!

Mark

I feel burdens falling away

Posted By: CN (user-33qs1t3.dialup.mindspring.com)

I've just read "The Story", this comes after starting to pursue my real essence years ago and then losing hope and enthusiasm. I feel the false burdens falling away and my motivation burning once again.

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Heart Warming

Posted By: Gordon B (user-33qs1l1.dialup.mindspring.com)

An excellent moving, heart warming and emotional format to convey to the world populace all of the C. of U. honesty, perspectives and advantages vs. the A.C. dishonesty, perspectives and disadvantages. Gordon

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Posted By: RD Skinner <711.144@compuserve.com

Hey buddy!

This is so good. How do I get a hold of The Story? I'd like a copy autographed! I can only anticipate the outcome. Let me know.

Sincerely,

RD Skinner

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Posted By: David C (user-33qs0tf.dialup.mindspring.com)

Mr. Hamilton,

I've only completed two chapters of your story so far, but it's already touched something deep inside me. I know this because a swell of emotions come up and makes me cry. I remember reading somewhere that crying because of happiness comes from years of repressed emotions...well, I'm not sure if that's true or not, but it has touched me so far.

I absolutely love hearing about people that care. Annabelle really truly cares about her students, and that makes me happy. There are several homeless people who live around me here in Boston and I feel like going out and giving them food right now...a little inconvenience for me, but a BIG deal for them. That feels good too.

I see where you are going...I run my own Internet business and am constantly thinking of new ways to create value for people...more ways to make money. I already have a 'staff' of people around the world that I pay for advertising services. My business grew 10 fold last year. I grossed almost a quarter million last year! And I'm still in my twenties!

I really wish there were people like Annabelle out there. I don't know any. The only person who comes close, the only person who really encouraged my entrepreneurial spirit, was my mother. God bless her. All my teachers in high school and college sucked. I got a 'D' in every business class I took because I wasn't afraid to challenge what the tenured professor was saying.

Anyway...I'm getting a little ahead of myself. Just thought I'd send a quick comment. You're awesome.

--David

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Posted By: RD Skinner <721.144@compuserve.com

Hey buddy!

This is so good. How do I get a hold of The Story? I'd like a copy autographed! I can only anticipate the outcome. Let me know.

Sincerely,

RD S

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"honesty" formula

Posted By: Michael M (user-33qs0tf.dialup.mindspring.com)

With the "honesty" formula as presented in The Story the world must become a better place...without it there will be certain destruction.

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Enlightening

Posted By: Carey Y (user-33qs186.dialup.mindspring.com)

Dear Mr. Hamilton,

Your Story is the most incredible, powerful thing I've ever read. It truly puts into real perspective the Neo-Tech principles, disciplines, etc. I'm sharing it with my 12-year old and am seeing with a visual and mental clarity how I need to be HIS Miss Annabelle...and to my other two children as they begin their education beyond infancy.

Words of thanks are hardly enough for what you have brought out for mankind. I simply cannot articulate the explosion of hope in so many areas of my life going on inside of me now. I have a whole new outlook on life and I know where I belong. But I do have one question: How do I help change the world to bring Neo-Tech to everyone?

Heartfelt thanks and gratitude.

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Re: Is the Story worth reading?? YES

Posted By: Steven (ppp-171.roc.smartworld.net)

: What is the Story all about?

That's like asking "What's the Neo-Tech Discovery all about?"-- removing negatives. In a nutshell, it's all about love and passion with a little anxiety woven in. It's the first true Neo-Tech novel.

Best,

Steven

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Exciting and Enlightening

Posted By: Alexandre (user-33qs0qj.dialup.mindspring.com)

The story is very exciting and enlightening. In fact I have realized we really have wasted the juicy part of our life. We were just schooled into the bicameral-values and just fell to all their directions. We were cowed into submission. There was no way I could have gone against the directions of my guardians at the time-our creativity vent was entirely blocked hence our collective plight in Africa. This situation is still going on presently in Africa and we find ourselves as culprits. Sometimes the way I talk to my small boy of eight also leaves much to be desired. I am to be blamed. I am still reading the story and will let you know my mind. Nevertheless this is a masterpiece. MH is just awesome. He is excellent. Neo-Tech is excellent it is extraO. It is liberating.

Alexandre

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Can't wait!

Posted By: Terry (user-33qs0mt.dialup.mindspring.com)

Mr. Mark Hamilton,

I have only read through the second chapter of your story, but I had to write you now! The feelings "The Story" gives me... are... just for the lack of a better word WONDERFUL!! I can't wait to continue to read the rest of "The Story" and I thank you for such a wonderful piece of literature.

Thank You.

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How to rescue Beorapparaus faster

Posted By: Bob S (user-33qs18c.dialup.mindspring.com)

Dear Mr. Hamilton,

Thank you for a wonderful story, a great set of integrations and all your efforts to date.

However, you shortchange your own Super-Society.

When faced with exponentially exploding technology and a task of fixed size, a different course of action can be taken.

Do nothing.... for a short while.

I had to make some gratuitous assumptions about how rapidly technology was moving and I assumed that the light-speed limit wouldn't fall.

If Ian waited 6 months the following effects would follow:

- Instead of .666c the ship should be able to attain .999c - The ship could be built in 4 months or less - Launch at 10 months - Beorapparaus rescued 11 years from start of project - Beorapparaus rescued 4 years 7 mo earlier - Ship returns to earth with Beorapparaus 21 years 2 mo from project start saving 9 yrs 10 mo

And the most gratuitous assumption of all, if costs are dropping by half for every order of magnitude improvement the total cost of launching the mission should drop by at least a third. [Now, let's see ...a virtual 10% commission on project savings would be at least $30 billion.......perhaps Jake can earn it in the story and redeposit it towards the project.]

I'm sure Dr. Wallace could play with the exponents and create the most accurate scenario.

But what a society it would be where doing nothing actually improves my ability to do a task!

Thank you again for a beautiful vision of the future.

Bob

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"The Story": Moving and Enlightening

Posted By: Pedro M (nyf-ny-cache1.icg.net)

I can't wait to come home from work ever since I started reading "The Story" from your website until I am done.

I can see through my mind's eye the events unfolding before me, as if I am there present and observing what is happening, which touched me emotionally and moved me to tears as I read every chapter!

It's great, unique, prophetic, and enlightening! Well done! And thank you for the intangible values you have given us.

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Recollection

Posted By: Marek J (user-33qs0em.dialup.mindspring.com)

Dear Mark,

Many sincere wonderful words have been told about The Story by others. I am not going to repeat them. Instead of words, you have my standing ovation.

The Story is written by you, a man who once spoke a few words to me personally. That recollection gives me a lot of satisfaction.

Marek J. - Australia

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Posted By: SH (user-33qs0em.dialup.mindspring.com)

Hello Mark,

I am taking this opportunity to write you to thank you for the story that I have just read. My involvement with NT goes back several years & my life has been enriched beyond anything I have ever imagined since reading NT discovery & other subsequent literature I have purchased from your company. The concepts & puzzle building skills & resulting conscious revelations & integrations have gained me results in all area's of my life & now "The story" has helped me see the path that will lead to acceptance of NT by the masses! The story touched me deeply & I cried many times as I read it (both tears of joy & sorrow). The story is inclusive in it's goal of teaching the NT matrix & god-man concept, a basic need that will be required before biological immortality can be achieved. Keep up the valuable work & thank you. I look forward to the opportunity to buy more NT products in the future & have no doubt that OUR goal of biological immortality will be reached in OUR life times!

Your fellow god-man,

Spencer H

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Posted By: Lynn H (user-33qs1q2.dialup.mindspring.com)

I have been wrestling with "The Book" for some time now. I can understand a lot of it, but it just doesn't completely sink in. Now Neo-Tech is in a context I can more readily assimilate. I am so excited! All of it is starting to make sense to me - not just bits and pieces here and there. I'm on Chapter 13 and I fear I may be shrugging off my regular duties in light of "The Story". Nah, I'm not that bad just yet, but close. I hope it will be available in hard-copy; I don't know if my little printer can handle such a work load.

To the future!

Lynn H

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The Story

Posted By: Per (user-33qs1q2.dialup.mindspring.com)

In Response To: Dude! (Lynn H)

Many thanks to the author of 'the story' 1-19. It was a fun way to re-integrate with the NT concepts. One metaphor I hadn't caught before was the idea that a Neothink success puzzle is like a map, and you can follow that map to the future instead of following external authority to an unchanging present.

-Per

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Enormous emotions

Posted By: wayne h k (user-33qs0so.dialup.mindspring.com)

The STORY is filling me with enormous emotions that are the kind I feel happy about - I feel I'm not alone any more. And there are thinkers like me who refuse to mind create reality and who cut through the illusions to see actual reality. I hope to meet in person some of you so that I truly never feel alone again. The STORY fills my being with happiness so great tears fill my eyes and make it difficult to read further. I don't know what else to say I'm wrung out.

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Hope Revitalized

Posted By: Daniel C (user-38lc5nk.dialup.mindspring.com)

Upon finishing "The Story," I have realized that among the many emotions experienced during the course of the reading, one emotion stands above the rest: hope. Fighting the battle of disillusionment with our current world, while witnessing the injustices, the robberies, and the murders by society's "leaders" is a constant source of pain and struggle. Implementing and integrating honest and creative ideas is seemingly always met by strong and forceful opposition. We live in a bizarre and irrational world indeed. Yet the hope instilled in me by all of the NT publications was revamped and amplified in my reading of "The Story." It provided a clear and understandable model of NT philosophy, but more importantly, it allowed me to experience The Civilization of the Universe now. I feel reenergized and ready to create and provide values that will help bring The C of U into reality.

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Re: Powerful

Posted By: Gavriel S (abde22b3.ipt.aol.com)

Its interesting to note that there must be so much psychology integrated into the story that the emotional feelings will be felt differently and peak at different places for any reader depending on their own minds. I just can't wait for The Dialogues and Quantum Crossings. I hope they are released

Gav

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Posted By: Mike (proxy-567.public.rwc.webtv.net)

The Story is very moving and emotional. Its story form helps the reader to learn the ideas presented very quickly. I can't wait to finish it and begin rereading!

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Re: Self-Placement

Posted By: Gavriel S (abd6c3e1.ipt.aol.com)

I wish I could leave where I am and go to this kind of community that has this kind of teaching, I would do it.

Gav

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Over come with emotion

Posted By: E.Geoffrey S (host-209-215-52-140.tys.bellsouth.net)

I am not a very emotional person, but in the reading of the story I was over come with emotion several times.

Even though I knew it was not speaking of a particular persons I knew it was the experiences of many..

I have come to the conclusion that this story will be the break through that we have been seeking, the digital thinking and writing style of MH is beyond my imaginings

Ed.........the old man from the Tenn Mts.

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Thanks for a great story

Posted By: Josue R (user-33qs0rj.dialup.mindspring.com)

The story is the best tool you have to show people the possibilities behind neothink and all the advantages within this information. I cant wait to get to the next chapter. I'm trying to read as much information as I can before I start putting together something that I think will answer a lot of questions. Thanks

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WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE....

Posted By: Jason (user-33qs0mt.dialup.mindspring.com)

Dear Mr. Hamilton,

Ever since my first encounter with your father's writings (Zonpower, Neo-Tech Discovery) 4 years ago, to say my life has improved tremendously would be a gross understatement. Within the last 4 years, I have purchased many works written by Eric Savage, Frank Wallace and of course, yourself. I hold a great respect for your writing. My concentration is always focused 150% when I read your masterful works. When I saw the release of "The Story" a few weeks ago, I immediately cancelled my plans for that Friday and Saturday, just so I could read it. I finished the entire work in two days and just recently read the newly added chapter 36.

From my earliest memories and all through high school and now through my life today, I have always possessed an "unconventional" way of thinking. But like billions of people throughout history, I was slowly sinking into a death trap created by the criminally insane world that surrounds us. Neo-Tech has brought my "unconventional" thinking to heights I once could only dream about. I am a true "Believer" in Neo-Tech and from reading and charting your company's tremendous growth and progress over the last 4 years, I am excited to see "The Story" come to life. When I read it, I almost knew what you were going to say each chapter before I even read it.

I wish I could express my feelings right now, but I haven't developed that writing skill yet! Thank you Mark Hamilton...I hope to meet you in the New World!

Jason

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The Story

Posted By: Dave P (dyn-207.232.80.27.oma.dsl.radiks.net)

This book is an excellent novel which integrates the Neo-Tech advantages with the outline of the future that the book God-Man does. It wonderfully inspires and evokes emotions to work to fulfill the story. I found it hard to keep from reading end to end. Great work!!! Thanks

Dave P

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Characters

Posted By: Gavriel (user-33qs0pl.dialup.mindspring.com)

How about we search for the characters of The Story as recently released on NT homepage

Could Theodore by Bill Gates And Salinski be either Gerry Spence or Howard Freeman

Gavriel

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Characters

Posted By: "neowhere" (user-33qs0pl.dialup.mindspring.com)

In Response To: Moved from alt.neo-tech: The Story Characters (Gavriel)

Annabelle == Maria Montessori?? Not done reading yet, though. :-)

-Mike

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A breakthrough/inner child

Posted By: Lynn H (user-33qs0pl.dialup.mindspring.com)

The past few days I have been reading The Story in what little spare time I have. Ummm... everything is starting to click together now. The inner-child thing really got me thinking. In my younger days we used to play games like "what if this and what if that". We had come up with some pretty wild ideas back then - why isn't that quality encouraged to grow and be applied to real life scenarios? If I ever would have thought of applying those creative juices to real life, then I would be a totally different person. The pieces are starting to come together.

I have rediscovered my inner child and brought back that ability to think creatively to put the pieces together. It would be an absolute travesty if I ever let that ability fade in my daughter. As I make other breakthroughs, it will help me keep those alive in her as well.

I have taken small steps; this is my first leap. Cheers to many more to come!

Lynn H

PS. I'll be scanning Undernet for #neochat. If I don't see one, then I'll create one.

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Self-Placement

Posted By: Jerry B (adsl-63-195-145-222.dsl.scrm01.pacbell.net)

I have the child of the PAST within me. I enjoy "THE STORY" very much. I am still reading it. I am on Chapter eighteen, or somewhere around there. I am beginning to feel emotional in it also. The following is something I feel we must all do in relation to "THE STORY:"

This day; Sunday; January 23, I, Jerry B., place myself as though I were a student in Miss Anabelle's class maybe as much as over 30 years ago. What we deal with here is irrelevant to time. I feel as though I actually am in and am taught every thing Miss Annabelles' twelve students have been taught. Will Someone post a response please and will you tell me what you think?

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Easily usable to introduce NT

Posted By: Gavriel S (abd86ef7.ipt.aol.com)

This work will be used by me a great deal to fill my surroundings with advancing people, even NT people.

It is something that I can refer to anyone and everyone I want to. Most importantly for me at the moment, I'll be able to shove it in the hands of 'girls' and say, 'get back to me when your a woman'. I'll breath life into the muddy lifeless bodies of my anticiv friends and hopefully bring one into dual essence mode, hmm what's Nicoles number. 8^) (No, I have to be sly with her, sshhhh)

I'll let the 'women' give NT to the guys, so my leveraging power will be greater to influence them into value production (well it makes sense to me)

I can also now plunge NT into the precipice of rationalizations in the mystical blimps around me. It will be interesting to observe them as they interact with me after they have read some or all of it. The Story cant be faulted, because it gives nothing that can be, its sort of ambiguous with its mysticism stomping

Observations that will be interesting: that it is such an emotional book, I wonder what areas the 'blimps' will feel the emotions. After having done so, what are they going to be able to say, what will they do, will they expose their foolishness for me to behold as they try to deny the benevolence of The Story. Since they will have been deeply moved will they have opened up an exposed wound of rationalization that they can't heal over (until they are self-honest and leap). Will it compel them to seek more NT info to try and find acceptable rationalizations to their compromised 'bubble'. Also, will they be compelled to continue reading right through to the end. There'll be able to say they disagree and they believe in God almighty who is not knowable and is not your Zon, and a civilization like that cannot be made. Of course they can maintain there rationalizations but many will have to attack The Story, but The story will forever be an indestructible pole of reality that their mind will have to cover up in the vines of smoke and mirrors (to much mixed metaphors, to many metaphors period, I'll shut up now.)

Its gonna be a real good show, and valuable)

Like trying to think of the unpredictive 'new' sensations of listening to a piece of music for the first time, I really want to know how mystics and non-NTers will experience it. All those integrations in one go along with all that emotion.

I cried many times reading it. Only very short periods of crying. The suddenness of some of my outbursts reminded me of doing the same thing sometimes when I watch a neocheater on TV, or when I come out of thought about the anticiv back to my conscious awareness. Mark Hamilton is quite some writer (though I'd expect nothing less from a near God-Man). MH uses a style of writing and depiction that seems very different.

In the last few chapters, with the accomplishment of BI and all that, I didn't cry or feel like crying, I wonder why. I thought whilst reading Ch33/34 if MH will have set me up to cry on reading the end of 35. He did. Brilliant.

Gav

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Thoroughly enjoyed

Posted By: Delores S (user-33qs14e.dialup.mindspring.com)

I thoroughly enjoyed the story about Miss Annabelle. It is unfortunate, at first I felt the story was fictional, too many times things such as this happens. I have no use for the politicians, judges, or lawyers. I applaud you. Count me in.

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The Story of LOVE

Posted By: mrkeyman (user-33qs0ud.dialup.mindspring.com)

Dear Mark

Happiness is here to stay and your story made me feel so Great as all your other writings. thanks

Rufus John W

PS: I am waiting to cast my vote for our neo President!

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Re: Heart Warming

Posted By: John Mac (ppp-16-120.kems.net)

In Response To: Heart Warming (Gordon B)

I really feel that the Neo-Tech movement towards the Civilization of the Universe has taken a turn for the better. It seems to me we are seeing an increasing amount of synergy between the writing of Dr. Wallace and his son. And I've been impressed lately by some of the very genuine compassion given and taken recently by contributors to these boards. I have felt for some time now that NTP was just a tad too clinical in its approach, albeit that, as far as I am aware, no monument has ever been erected to a critic, only to those who have been criticized. ( And what good is a monument anyway? ) This more emotional appeal seems timely to me, and, apart from its intrinsic value, will prove valuable strategically. I have thought for some time that it is not enough to win the minds of our fellow citizens, but that we need to win their hearts as well. One may be fairly convinced about the futility of trying to answer chicken-egg type questions, while still sensing that the essential ether of existence is a reservoir of ever present goodness, eternally available to be tapped. Some will say that is a mystical notion. Let them demonstrate the dishonesty or laziness in it. Some might even say that to allocate time to making a post like this is irrational, that the time could be better used writing information for sale. Such critics will also have to argue that The Story should only be available to those providing their credit card details. There is a fine line to be drawn between philanthropy and altruistic sacrifice, but I submit that it is a useful distinction. And there is little to be gained by a Neo-Tech clique. It is time for the appeal to be broadened and to be more all-encompassing and, dare I say, tolerant. Mark Hamilton's most recent endeavor comes across to this reader as most evidently a real labor of love, and consequently has the potential to attract many readers who might otherwise be repelled. It is, as you say, Gordon, heart warming.

Best regards

John Mac.

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From: Avajo G <a.d.g@worldnet.att.net

Subject: the story

I've only read 3 chapters and already your story has moved me more than any other story I've read. Its a good read and I learn some things as well. You've always been my favorite Neo-Tech author. Dr. Wallace is ok but I don't always understand his stuff. Eric Savage is ok too, but it doesn't really move me emotionally like your writings. I don't always mean in a good way. Sometimes you piss me off and sometimes you sadden me and at times I resent you for making me see through the pretty illusions woven by "them". Sometimes I wish I didn't know anything and lived in a state of blissful ignorance. But I love you. you have probably saved my life. I still have a long way to go on my path to rational thinking but I know that when I finally make the jump I wont even miss the old ways. That's all I have to say for now my friend.

Avajo G

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Posted By: PD (Dreamer@aol.com)

My Dear Mr. Hamilton,

I haven't finished your story yet, I'm on chapter 18 and am a new comer to Neo-Tech, but I am very impressed. If I could wish one thing for the world, it would be that all the students studying to be teachers read your story. Before their minds have been corrupted by the world. I have many friends that home school their children, and I am so taken by what you have to say that I am printing up "The Story" to pass around to them. Home schooling is growing, within all of America, and it seems to me that those are the children that could be reached first, right now. I will admit that Neo-Tech is hard for me. I can't just read it, but have to study it to understand, with lots of stops to look up words, but "The Story" has made much of it fall into place for me. A lot of things in America have gotten out of hand, parents and teachers have lost there way along with most of "the people". They have forgotten that we are the united states of AMERICA and not the UNITED STATES OF america. Your story not only touched my heart, but my brain. I have always been an "odd ball" or called "weird" because I think on my own, I do on my own, and I walk in peace and love. People try to push me into there mold, but I refuse to go. Your story showed me that I am on the right path, I have a long ways to go, but I will get there. Thank you for reminding me of all the good things to come, as I continue on my journey.

Peggy C

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Posted By: Stephen W (user-33qs18j.dialup.mindspring.com)

The essence of the Neo-Tech,

I feel that "The Story" has encapsulated the essence of the Neo-Tech Discovery, in such a way, that I no longer feel alone, after having cast aside the indoctrinated beliefs of my past.

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Jolted Awake

Posted By: Tim (spider-wk014.proxy.aol.com)

The Story is one of the most compelling pieces of literature I've ever read.

Tim

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Posted By: (Bellsouth.net)

Reading The Story, is having some sort of effect, and I'm not sure exactly what kind, but I've gotten up at 3 am to continue the reading, and even started reading it to my children.

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From: Lazarus L (info@newutopia.com)

Dear Mark Hamilton,

I just read The Story. I am amazed. I conceived of New Utopia to begin anew with what I thought to be the only escape from the villainy of so called democracies. I don't know that your "Story" has changed my perception. I suppose that I still think that a new environment, with all the virtues, will set an example and others will follow. That somewhere a politician will see the light and do as Jonathan Ward did in your story. Unfortunately those who have tried to make even smaller changes have been struck down by the established system.

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From: albert ca (alber1@ix.netcom.com)

Dear Sirs,

This was absolutely my favorite part. I now have a handsome one year old baby boy and a very lovely girlfriend. The joy and love I feel through constant DTC, FIH, and WSA is virtually indescribable. It must be the next level of emotions.

sincerely,

Albert C

"That sound, Jake thought, that amazing sound! He stopped and looked at Little Jakey. His brown eyes were wide, brilliant and his chubby cheeks were rosy red. The corners of his mouth were curved up high, a smile so full of glee that it was crooked and out of coordination. He looked back at his father and cocked his head, looking almost as if he knew something and was wondering if his father was figuring it out. Little Jakey laughed again."

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From: Gary R <solomon69@hotmail.com)"The Story" literally blew me away. It is your best work to date. It is going to take something like this to elect a Neo-Tech president. You are going to need a Neo-Tech oriented med chain and talk show hosts to Pocounter the liberal media. "The Story" reminds me of "The Harrad Experiment" that novel advocated a small group to reform society. Unfortunately it called for the use of government to achieve desired results. Keep up the great work. Together we can free this country from the politicians and other neocheaters. Neo-Tech publishing has helped me to see the fraudulent nature of most forms of media, talk show hosts like Rush Limbaugh, Dr. Laura, etc..

Your website gets better every week. It is a shame the author of "No More Lies" is no longer with us. Nowhere have I read such a clear explanation of Enlightenment. Your books are getting better every year. Give my deepest regards to Dr. Wallace. His Neo-Tech discovery book should be recommended reading for everyone. Just watching the news on tv, reading newspapers really reveals how much of a topsy turvy world we live in. I really enjoy reading the positive and negative comments on your website. The contrast between them is simply amazing. You can really tell who should be reading Neo-Tech and are losing out by not doing so.

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NYT Article on Rarity of Life

Posted By: Bob (punkrockgirl.wildmonkey.net)

http://www.nytimes.com/library/national/science/020800sci-space-life.html

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On NT.

Posted By: Mike C (200.dayton-06-07rs.oh.dial-access.att.net)

You know,

The more I understand NT, especially after reading The Story, the more I see what is going on.

The deeper I go down the rabbit's hole, more and more I am beginning to *see* what is going on.

Promote NT Values or Die,

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Re: How to rescue Beorapparaus faster

Posted By: Colin I (host62-6-1-156.btinternet.com)

In Response To: How to rescue Beorapparaus faster (Bob S)

Surely earthlings/zons would be able to develop technology which could transceive Beorapparaus's consciousness, without the need for a "physical journey"

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Re: Speechless

Posted By: Mike W (eve-wa10-25.ix.netcom.com)

And to Mark H and his The Story: All I can say is that I'm "Speechless in Seattle." You've outdone yourself (again!) :-) Thanks so much for such a wonderful story. I can't seem to get it out of my mind.

-Mike

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Congratulations from France !

Posted By: Nicolas R (user-33qs1f9.dialup.mindspring.com)

Dear Mr. Hamilton,

I like very much your Story, and I hope it will be soon available in French.

When you want to translate it, please send me a mail: it will be a pleasure to help you.

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'Miss Annabelle'

Posted By: Jason M (user-33qs0em.dialup.mindspring.com)

Hello Mr. Hamilton; I feel a little strange knowing that I'm actually addressing you; someone I've, up 'till now, have only read and read about. I'm planning to purchase your Cosmic Business Control to further build on Eric Savage's Global Wealth Power.

I just wanted to comment on the story of Miss Annabelle by saying that she reminds me very much of my sixth-grade teacher, Ms. B, who is still teaching at Marina Middle School here in San Francisco. The only difference is that the school has always valued Ms. B above most of the rest of their staff, as opposed to feeling as if she were threatening their mystical values. Although many were mystical, they never stood in the way of personal choice; even for children.

Great story!

And, continued success to Neo-Tech; its success is everyone's benefit.

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Posted By: Susan C. (user-33qs0ud.dialup.mindspring.com)

Dear Mr. Hamilton,

I woke up at 4am and had to get back to reading your story. I saw your e-mail address at the bottom of the chapter (has it always been there?) and I fought a battle with myself trying to decide whether to write you. I thought maybe I should read and study all the Neo-Tech material I could find first so that I would not seem a complete idiot...but my emotions overcame my fear.(As usual)

I just wanted to tell you how much your story means to me. Learning about Neo-Tech has not been a shock or surprise to me, or changed my way of thinking...its been more like a coming home. Like "Wow, there are actually people out there who think like I do...I've just never been able to put my finger on it and categorize it into to a neat, simple, honest, easy to understand way of life.

Maybe now that I am starting to see things a little clearer I can begin a real life, a happy life...just tell me that there are things like described in the story that are actually happening. I need that Hope.

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Re: The Story

Posted By: Marcel D (user-33qs1q2.dialup.mindspring.com)

In Response To: The Story (Per)

I love what I read so far in "The Story". This story can be understood by those who are New to Neo-tech. It also connects emotionally with the reader.

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Re: Enormous emotions

Posted By: Steven (ppp-29.roc.smartworld.net)

From where I sit I think the writers at NTP have demonstrated an uncanny ability to write/express/convey with a high degree of accuracy while pushing the envelope of charting new frontiers. Anyone can use NTP's work to push their own envelope to greater knowledge and penetrate deeper and wider into new and existing markets.

Warmly,

Steven

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YOWZA

Posted By: Mark C (spider-wk022.proxy.aol.com)

I, too, could not stop reading The Story. It is very well written and I think even young children could understand much of the content. My partner and I, Randy Fricke are also trying to "enlighten" the masses through his music. You can check it out at www.randyfricke.com We would greatly appreciate ANY feedback and ideas of how to promote the CD. Thanks for all your fabulous work.

Mark

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The Story

Posted By: Gav (user-33qs19n.dialup.mindspring.com)

I had to take a break after reading chapter 3. 'The Story'. So many thoughts, what an experience.

Gav

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Life

Posted By: JM (user-33qs19n.dialup.mindspring.com)

I have just been reading "The Story" which is a very powerful revelation into life.

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Center Stage With The Story Phenomenon

Posted By: Steven (98afca73.ipt.aol.com)

Perhaps some additional points are worth noting. I think it could be the most profitable due to several reason. But let me start by saying that, to the best of my knowledge, profit is secondary. ...A distant second at this point and time, and will become more distant as the jump progresses. Mass marketing will accrue huge profits. For which the retail cost would be fair market value. I equate that to low cost, not to dismiss the fact that-for reasons forthcoming -- people would willingly pay several times the fair market value.

Yes the tremendous value/benefit to the reader/owner would warrant paying well over $100 for The Story. Which I think is the second book in The Book. Yet, even as a stand alone book it certainly holds its own value well over the $100 demarcation point. That brings us to the first priority which is mass marketing. Regardless of the extremely powerful advertising that can be created to sell the book, when the cost of ownership hits the $100 mark, sales reduce. For example, a printed information product will sell nearly twice as many at $97 versus $100. Interestingly, I have found that $117 out-sells $100. But still far less than $97, and the $97 still returns more front-end profit. Not to mention increased profit on the backend. [Teddy describes his frontend-backend plan in The Story.]

The primary goal is mass readership. Perhaps the most effective mass marketing and advertising program will go something like this: A person can read They Story for free at the NT Web site, but if they want to buy it they will have to buy The Book-NTP's customer list is sent a direct mail package offering them first dibs on The Book at a special discounted price-they create a control direct mail package and test it on several of their best pulling rented mailing lists-it is learned that because of the general readership nature of The Story that it can be profitably sold to a wider universe of mailing lists-NTP receives offers and extends deals with other publishers to sell The Book to their list with the list owner's endorsement (even though readers' comments are the mitigating factor that causes most people to buy) -- The book makes it onto one of the many "Best Seller" lists-people increasingly buy the book and give it more word of mouth advertising than any previous book they've spoken highly of-The Book continues showing up on more and more best seller lists-word-of-mouth advertising has people scurrying from bookstore to bookstore to the Internet in order to buy The Book which is repeatedly selling out faster than any previous book- with offers coming in from several talk shows, a NTP representative, perhaps the author himself, Mark Hamilton, appears on a special showing of Oprah Winfrey to discuss what has made The Book, what is now considered almost a phenomenon, such a huge success.. doing a segment where Mark (or the rep) fields questions from the audience - it is on Oprah's show that Mark (or the rep) announces a specific piece of news that divulging it propels this already near phenomenon upward-outward spiral to harmonious-epidemic proportions.

At that point in time people would be willing to pay $1,000 for The Book. But since mass readership is the primary goal, the cost of buying the book is less than production cost. With profits accrued on the backend.

I don't know what backend products NTP is working on, has waiting in the wings or is joint venturing with. But as outlined in The Story, they will most likely be neothink puzzles that integrate with the Super Puzzle. As described in Book 1, think about a flood of people using neothink to build their Friday night essence puzzles. Some of them may become integral parts to the Super Puzzle fulfilling it's goal. NTP will sublime to the Super Puzzle creating the C of U on Earth.

When I think of the ramifications of The Book and The Story they are exponential. To grasp what I've been trying to convey, but from additional perspectives, here's two insights that deal with exponential. The first is the numbers used to express how destructive the IRS is when they attack Miss Annabelle. Invert the premise and those numbers (63 billion dollars, not counting indirect loss that would dwarf that) reflect the profitability/value of The Book.

The second example of the exponential ramification is more direct. It's called "viral marketing". A brief explanation follows:

"In 1996, Sabeer Bhatia and Jack Smith pioneered a great new product category-free web-based email. But many great ideas and great products have withered on the vine. The special catalyst for Hotmail's torrid growth is what we at Draper Fisher Jurvetson have come to call "Viral Marketing" -- not because any traditional viruses are involved, but because of the pattern of rapid adoption through word-of-mouth networks. Viral Marketing powerfully compounds the benefits of a first-mover advantage. And it's something we eagerly look for when evaluating any Internet startup company. As a founding investor in Hotmail and a member of their board of directors, we think Hotmail is a great case study on the impact of the Viral Marketing strategy over its full life cycle."- Steve Jurvetson and Tim Draper

Yes, people would be willing to pay a dollar a page for The Book, but they'll never have to. And if isn't The Book or The Story that is the front end product that is center stage of the phenomenon, well, then imagine a more powerful book that will fill the bill... Then write it and inject it into the market.

Warmly,

Steven

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Re: Center Stage With The Story Phenomenon

Posted By: Buffalo Expatriate (user-2iveag2.dialup.mindspring.com)

The book makes it onto one of the many "Best Seller" lists-people increasingly buy the book and give it more word of mouth advertising than any previous book they've spoken highly of-The Book continues showing up on more and more best seller lists-word-of-mouth advertising has people scurrying from bookstore to bookstore to the Internet in order to buy The Book which is repeatedly selling out faster than any previous book-

That sounds like what happened with "The Celestine Prophecy." James Redfield was rejected by virtually every major publishing house so he self-published his book and sold it in independent bookstores. Warner Books came sniffing around after only they saw how many unit$ were moved $olely by word of mouth.

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so-far-so-good

Posted By: willy (proxy-377.public.rwc.webtv.net)

The Story. most importantly I see ways of honestly dealing with the dishonest people, and some good ideas on how to help educate my own children a little simpler than it seems sometimes.

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Completely understood.

Posted By: Rick G (proxy2-external.rdc1.sdca.home.com)

I remember the first time (1986)I read NT and I couldn't understand any of it. Then as I purchased each and every product I understood a little bit more. I always thought this was done on purpose. Now, NT is broken down into the simplest form in The Story. I love it, Thank You again NT, it looks as though the light at the end of the tunnel is very near.

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Posted by: Darna M (spider-tr032.proxy.aol.com)I was amazed at how so many of the things that Miss Annabelle was teaching the students were already integral to my thinking, but I'd never felt that they would be welcomed by others.

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Posted By: Sandi S (spider-we021.proxy.aol.com)

I Loved The Story, it has wonderful insight into our future.

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Posted By: Alan Zonnman (user-33qs12t.dialup.mindspring.com)

Wow! I really think you have hit the nail on the head Mark! I have only finished the first three chapters, but I am eager to read the rest. It's getting late and I must get up early and sell cars. I will continue reading Monday evening.

This appears to be a very eloquent approach to making Neo-Tech much more commercially viable. I look forward to finishing The Story!

Keep up the awesome work Mark!

Your Friend, Alan Zonnman

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Posted By: acl (acl@tampabay.rr.com)

Dear Mr. Hamilton,

I have been buying and reading Neo-Tech literature for over six years now and have found your work (The Story) a very clever way of introducing the concepts of Neo-Tech to the masses.

The story is in a word "brilliant".

I have consumed all of the manuscripts and other articles from many authors both in print and on the net with gusto and will continue to evolve with the hope of better understanding and application of the concepts. I have had moments of lack of understanding but never doubts.

I hope the ideas put forth in the story can be implemented, such as the Neo-Tech Party and the pursuit of biological immortality.

If I can be of assistance, please feel free to contact me.

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Posted By: BP (2670@aol.com) The Story is Brilliant!! I have been reading your books for ten years but THE STORY makes it all clear. Have you considered publishing the story as a separate book for sale to the general public?

Bill P

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Posted By: Mr. A (n@texas.net)Hi. This is John S. of Houston, Texas- a NT owner since November 1988. Years ago, on the Neo-Tech Newsgroup, I spoke many times of my goal was to mine asteroids -- as a natural step towards Mars colonization.

I am smiling from ear to ear, and I laughed out loud when I read, in Chapter 33 of The Story, "...mankind would be inhabiting Mars. We would be mining asteroids for natural resources, WHICH A BUSINESS IN TEXAS WAS ALREADY RESEARCHING." Was that just a coincidence, or did you recall my posts?

I am highly motivated and excited beyond words to initiate or help initiate some paradigm ultimately leading to the C of U. It is so obvious, but the masses need to see a tangible reality to integrate it. The Story must be initiated. I am a combination of Jake, Ian, and Theodore (and a little Rico). A relationship-builder, spokesperson, physicist/scientist, and puzzle-builder.

I commend your publishing of The Story as a BEAUTIFUL move that I did not expect! I'm shaking with excitement. Let's GET IT GOING.

If things work out the way I 95% expect them to, I will be in a position to help with the mass exposure to these concepts, the first of which may indeed be a TV series of "The Story".

Sincerely,

John S

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Posted By: LD (tailers@aol.com)Awesome. I find myself laughing and cheering out loud. This story is a powerful tool I can use to influence family & friends THANK YOU! My brothers and I have been following your business model and will be replicating it across the country perhaps as soon as next year. I've waited this long to say anything about what we're doing because talk is cheap. Actions speak louder than words I'm confident we'll meet one day. I remember the day I received the NT discovery package in the mail. I flipped through it, seeing mention of And Objectivism, and ideas BEYOND hers. I felt a twitch of jealousy as I discovered that there existed an established competitor... NT was doing what I wanted to be doing...that was a few years ago. I hadn't been to your web site in quite a while, when just a few weeks ago I found "The story" & "the book." a new level of progress! I read when I can get to get back to the story!

Michael S

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Posted By: Paul G. L (PGL007@AOL.COM)

THE STORY really makes sense. It was written on my level so that I have better understanding of all Neo-Tech literature. Mark you've done an outstanding job. Keep up the GREAT WORK YOUR DOING.

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Posted By: JOHN J (12.25.55.117.snfr.cyberwc.net )

Dear Mr. Hamilton, I am fairly new to neo-tech (I purchased "The Book" in Nov. '99). I want to become more and more involved with Neo-Tech and what it represents (total honesty, and not doing things at the expense of others).

 

I visit the Neo-Tech web site regularly now and have been reading "The Story". I am currently on Chapter 12 and can't seem to get enough of Neo-Tech's writings. During Chapter 11, Jake and Jessie talk about Jonathan Ward (the Neo-Tech Presidential candidate). My question is do we (Neo-Techers) have such a candidate? Is it possible that You are that person? If not, who is? I'd like to give my support in any way possible!

 

Thank you for enlightening me and helping me turn my life around for the better!

I truly mean that from the bottom of my heart!

 

I eagerly await your response!

 

Sincerely yours,

John J

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Posted By: David Wayne C (davidc@mindsprind.com)

I enjoy the spiritually uplifting qualities of "The Story.

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Posted By: GLORIA M (GLO@YAHOO.COM)

I'm in the process of reading THE STORY, and I feel everyone who reads it can benefit from it.

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Posted By: J.K. (WFLSB104-22.splitrock.net)

Hi Mark I have been reading through the Godman/Neo-Tech book which I find truly fascinating and what I call the missing link to Life and its true meaning. I'm reading The Story now and it's truly amazing how these children were changed the way they were. The even more amazing part is that the town this happened in was where I was born. Actually I lived in Cheektowaga for about 3 years when I was first born and then we moved. I really wish I would have had a teacher just like Miss. Annabelle cause I'd probably have solved all my problems by now. Just reading your published work makes me more amazed by the minute. You truly are an amazing author and I'm looking forward to reading the entire book. Thanks again for changing my life I can already tell things are getting better every day it's totally amazing. Excellent work guy, Later, Jason, a loyal future Godman for LIFE.

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Posted By: Ramon (user-33qs19l.dialup.mindspring.com)

Mr. Hamilton, I sense that following in the footsteps of your father, you will be able to do great things. I think The Story teaches the essence of happiness in a neat way. Congratulations!

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Posted By: David (david@breathemail.net)

I'm reading The Story and am so engrossed I've just realized it's 3.40 am! Fantastic stuff and so logical.

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Posted By: Paul G. L. (g210.goes.com )

What I like about THE STORY was the peoples heart and love they had. I can't wait until we see this. I would love to see more stories like this from Mark.

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Posted By: floyd (proxy-702.public.rwc.webtv.net )

I certainly want to see this valuable information stay on the web. I'm reading "The Story" and about miss Anabelle'schildren. I'm fascinated! It seems I've been searching for this all my life. I want to be involved in any way I can.

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Posted By: Jim B (jimb@engineer.com)

I am impressed by the content of the site and have begun Reading 'The Story' finding it inspirational.

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Posted By: Brian G

Mark, Wow, I'm just starting chapter four. I've definitely gained a ton of value already from the 3 previous chapters. Great job.

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Posted By: floyd (floy@webtv.net )

I bought THE BOOK and I just finished reading The Story. Wow! Is about all I can say for now. I'm a much changed person. Which I would never have believed could happened just by reading anything. Thanks for letting me express myself.

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Posted By: : beth (beth@hotmail.)

I am astonished at your masterpiece, "THE BOOK." I had been meaning to read it for some time and finally got around to that time today...I have been held captive at my computer for the past 7 hours! I want to thank you for your insight and elegant articulated culmination of ideas expressed in Neo-Tech/Zonpower within your story. What a beauty. This truly is the American Beauty. Thank you for restoring my vision...I know what my FRIDAY NIGHT ESSENCE is and I will not be taken from that path until my goal is reached. From one value-producer to another, thank you again. "When you're smiling, the whole world smiles with you..." Beth, Future Recording Engineer/Producer/Studio Manager

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Posted By: Terry K. (wc071.proxy.aol.com)

Hi Mark....I just read the story as a first time on-line visitor....This was the best description of woman/man romantic love I've ever heard and I was impressed with your characters and the thought that went into this work......thanks!......I'm looking forward to "Hearing" more from you......Terry

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Posted By : Charles (au-montreal.ssss.gouv.qc.ca)

I often find myself thinking, how would so and so of the initial group of 12 handle this or that particular situation I am experiencing at work, at home with the kids or with my spouse. I guess the biggest challenge is to transpose "The Story" into our daily lives...

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Posted By: TERRY & ANNE (spider032.proxy.aol.com)

Just finished reading your novel. I'm a little addle-brained as I just finished and it's 2:00 in the morning. I purchased and started reading your manuscript some time ago, then lost it on the way back from a construction job in Lexington Va. I was captivated by the concepts in it, confused and scared. Even though the "matrix" hasn't snapped for me yet on many levels I see the truth of what you are saying. This was really clarified by reading the novel, bringing forth a clearer mental picture of what you are trying to get across. I hope to be among you one day, the top of my field, enjoying life, wealthy with romantic love. My greatest dream is to one day organize, fund research to help end the horror of disease, a motivation greatly brought on by seeing my mother suffering from a dead pancreas. Thanks, you have really lifted my spirits and given me hope during this really dark time.

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Posted By: Ed (spider-tn63.proxy.aol.com)

"The Story" is worth reading, Mark Hamilton proves to be a good storyteller. He makes good use of the ideas of neo-tech in his story. Only wish I had the book instead of having to read it off my computer screen.

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Posted by:: Jason B @proxy-642.public.rwc.webtv.net )

Comments: A very solid story about happiness and true dreams not those dreams that are cookie cutter capitalist crap.

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Posted By : Mark F. ndf53-05-p80.gt.saix.net

I think this is a tremendous insight. This story is very simple and straight forward. We often forget about what makes us truly happy. We get so wrapped up as adults into our day to day living that we miss the true reason for living.

I am glad I read this story today. Now I hope I can put it back into practice.

Mark F.

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Posted By: Dick H (1Cust201.tnt1.honolulu2.hi.da.uu.net)

I am at page 295 of The Story... every time I begin to think, "how can this happen, with all that is against it," The Story, answers my question. Limitless...

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Posted By: EARL

Hello Mr. mark Hamilton, I wish I had , had a teacher like miss Annabel, when I was in the 3rd. grade .I think this article or story about miss Annabel , should be required reading in the schools .. , religious , and secular .. my own life has been a dreary one , influenced by the "church" and "prudish" adults .. at 68 years , looking back over my life , I find that I never really knew what true love meant .. many of my generation , equated the physical "act" as being "in love" restroom "graffiti" in the lower grades, were often our guide to sexual pleasure .. being from a very dysfunctional home , where our parents never showed any "open affection" before us, hugs , kisses, praise etc. was not a way to encourage us as grown men , to know "what to do" in ways of pleasing our wives .. I am just a "layman" no degrees etc. but I hope with all of my being, that society will keep on "evolving" so that there will be "happiness in the male , female relationships " thanks for opening my mind to other views about life !!!! and where mankind is headed.. earl ..

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Posted By: miranda (organism.teldta.com)

I liked The Story very much. At times it brought tears of joy and excitement like I had not felt in years.

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Posted By: A & (nsne01-0240.sne.embratel.net.br )

Hi Mark, wow that sure was a very interesting subject for the start of the book. I would really like to read it because I was glued to the screen. Usually I don't like to read in-depth things and the computer, I have no trouble reading a book, that was just amazing!!!!!! I will be picking up your book, The Story - Sure makes you think about life itself.

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Posted By : David (dye@dsd.org )

I think that this is an excellent work! I am a Neo-Tech owner, and even though I have intellectually embraced the essence of the works, I am still struggling with turning open the spigot of riches and neothink. I have always been a rebel all my life, and understand the vast deceptions that masquerade as truth in today's society.

I never used to understand fully the concept of the "inner child" that you spoke of in the Neo-Tech Weapon(the small book), but with this story, it's easier to understand what you're talking about. I, myself, still embrace my inner child, which may be one of the reasons that I get along so well with children. I have a special love for children, because of the energy, enthusiasm, and willingness they have to think without boundaries, until their minds are truncated by the "edjamkational" system that the bureaucrats have implemented, which is designed to tell them WHAT to think instead of HOW to think!

I really have found a great value in this book, and it makes it a little easier for me, and I'm sure many others, to conceptualize what is happening, and to be able to relate to these truths that you disseminate better. The story really hits home, and brings to life all of the things that you were talking about in the previous NT/Zon materials. I really have to thank you very much for affecting my thinking for the rest of my life. I'm working on becoming a great value producer myself, and am building a business of my own at present. Throughout all the years, I have always had a special desire to be a big empire-building business titan. I think that the indoctrination and conditioning I have had for years, I am still recovering from, but finding out and admitting a problem is present is over 50% of fixing it! I am continuing to strive for excellence, freedom, and the spreading of the truth about our anticivilization. I believe the web is going to make it very hard for the "establishment" to hide the truth for much longer!

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Posted By: Laurel (spider-t041.proxy.aol.com)

Some people want the truth and this will really open their eyes. I was in a chat group and someone told me to get a copy of The Story. I'm so happy I did, I have been struggling with issues like this my whole life. It really opened my eyes.

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Posted By: Generation X (dialup-63.208.59.chicago1.level3.net)

The Story" was the best book I've ever read so far...Really! Its concepts should be taught to everyone. Young or Old. Everyone!

It made me cry...It made me think.

My understanding of "The Story" had changed my life...made me love life in a sense never experienced.

Thank you NT!

~~~Generation X~~~

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Posted By: Richard (spider-to03.proxy.aol.com0

I haven't taken time to read anything not related to my business in years. The other day, I clicked into the NT website and casually began reading "The Story." While skeptical at first, knowing what a tremendous effort is required to write effective, coherent fiction...I was surprised, amazed, and finally, delighted. MH's work is, I believe, the most powerful NT publication to date. It is mind boggling, the mass of integrations he managed to squeeze into this attention grabbing (and holding) drama. I hope this is just a taste of what's to come.

Congratulations, all of you, on one fine achievement which may move us closer to that new world.

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Posted By: M(mixter.2s.co.il)

I just finished reading the story, and I realized one thing - there will be no limit for the advancements of supersociety, life will be a never ending story that gets better and better. My point is, people should continue the story, or write their own versions of how they think humanity will leap into the CofU. And while doing this, let's try and use Neothink. Instead of producing fiction, use your own mind, your greatest asset, to create and predict the future. No matter if you do this for yourself, or publish it, as a result I will believe you will become tremendously motivated, much like the NTP authors, since you use your own Neothink mind to create a value. And the more you will find out about our civilizations ever-improving far future, by continuing the story, you will become more and more motivated to eliminate the current problems of our anti-civilization, and eventually find some important breakthrough solutions yourself. There's a very interesting point in the story when Jake reflects about anticivilization and about what was the biggest problem that prevented people from discovering Nature's Quintessential Secret, and finds out that the change of mentality started with an emotional change, which then triggered the peoples motivation. It simply comes down to that.. a matter of having the positive emotions to start ones motivational drive in order to make a start in creating values.. after that one critical starting point, one will never stop integrating and creating values.

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Posted By: (fljoy@juno.com)

Thank you so much for making The Story available on the Internet. I did have good teachers, but none like Miss Annabelle. Since I'm now 78 years old, Neo-Tech wasn't even thought of at that time. I purchased Neo-Tech in the past, perhaps it's the indoctrination of my past that has made it difficult for me to ratchet up my thinking and dispel the niggling bit of uneasiness at some of the concepts. Still, I've questioned the validity of Christianity for some time. The Story is what I needed to at last resonate fully with Neo-Tech. Again, thank you.

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NPosted By: Fred (proxy-62.public.rwc.webtv.net)

I really got caught up in "The Story" and at times forgot that it was fiction. Thank you for opening my eyes to a new beginning for me an for the entire world.

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Posted By:Generation X : (dialup-63.208.71.251.chicago1.net)

Did you like the New Civilization as described in The Story?

Did you like that New Life?

Would you like for The Story to become real in this life?

Would you like to experience happiness as described in The Story?

Would you like to have more friends that understand The Story the way you do?

Solution:

Introduce more and more people you know to Neo-Tech.

BUT...first introduce them to The Story.

DO NOT start out with the whole NT concepts at first.

'Get them' with The Story first...

Do it slowly.

Do it carefully.

Results will come with time...

The Story is better understood by people who are uncommon with NT.

Introduce The Story first...It will work out better this way for you and them...

 

Trust me...I know...

~~~Generation X~~~

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I have been a Neo-Tech member/subscriber since December 1987. The Neo-Tech information continues to get at the truth of WHAT IS not WHAT APPEARS TO BE! Kudo's to all of the Neo-Tech team and authors! "THE STORY" should be in every grade school classroom and library.

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Posted By: Rob E <zonpower@zonz.com

Mark, The Story has really fired me up. I've read Neo-Tech books for several years, but while I've understood most of what I've read, it sometimes seemed a little too far away to be able to take full advantage of in the here and now.

The Story has changed all that. I've searched for, found and am starting to implement my Friday Night Essence. Your book really has given me the impetus.

I seem to have a fair bit of Bobby in me, along with a little bit of Nattie and Miss Annabelle and a hint of a couple of the others.

I love giving classes and writing about things that improve one's quality of life. Helping other people find their own Friday Night Essences seems just right. And the marketing came clear as a beautiful spring morning in the countryside from a couple of things I read in The Story.

When you find the Johnny who wants to lead The Neo-Tech Party in Australia, let me know and I'll be one of the first to assist and will help with a huge amount of promotion.

For someone who's always had contempt for religion, I'm amused to find I might even have a bit of Jeremiah in me, too. The Church of Life sounds like a place I could enjoy and belong.

Cheers :-)

Rob

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Posted By: Kurt (216-53-211-075.ppp.minet.net)

I have read "The Story" on Neo-Tech's web site and want to inform you that even on the first reading, it has literally changed my life! And yes, I am going to read it even more deeply the second time.

 

"The Story" has ignited the dream within of being able to overcome obstacles such as those experienced by Ms. Annabelle. Your work in "The Story" invokes the desire to obtain invincibility through full honesty, striking down those who would destroy if given the permission. Permission being the failure to act honestly on one's own behalf.

 

I admire your work in "The Story" and I know it is something everyone in the world needs. Please keep "The Story" available! Without it, those stuck in the rut of anticivilization will continue to sink, never discovering and entering the C of U.

Kurt

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Posted By: Ken (Kenbie@aol.com)

Inspirational Fiction!

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Posted By: Gil (GMagno@cs.com)

Dear Mark, The Story is a wonderful story. I can identify with it because I've taught High School and resigned after seeing the atrocities.

The Story should be packaged as a pocket book with a beautiful cover and sold through anticivilization methods to all the bookstores in the US. I think that this is the only thing that will insure that a new civilization will begin by 2001.

I know that you don't want to do business with the AC. Fine. But mysticism is so deeply rooted that something BIG has to happen. The Story could be that, if it becomes a best seller; and I don't see why it can't with all of us behind it.

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Posted By: WRITES@aol.com

I had no idea where this story would lead. I even thought it would be simple. I can see that it is going much further than I believed, and that it is not simple. It is simply written so that anyone can understand it, and it is a fascinating story.

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Posted By: Spizzchiro@cs.com

After many years of living the quasi - Neo-Tech life, I am back. I have found the clouded world of mysticism just that. Being half here and half there showed in my world. I am back. I brought my children down the road of Neo-Tech - not even being aware of it! Changes are in the works to make my life Neo-Tech 100%. Thanks for THE STORY. It was a refreshing refresher!

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Posted By: Al/Dan (dialpoo-pri.voicenet.com)

This story has opened my eyes to things I have missed out on as a child and as grownup . If I'd of had some as remarkable as Miss Annabelle I would of been a better educated man and human being , THANK YOU I now see things I've been missing in my life .

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Posted By: CEnet@aol.com

I've just completed the second chapter of the story, superb!

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A great inspiration. The changes have been immense I find that I am currently able to do a whole lot more with my time as well as spending time developing my new business venture. It only takes THE STORY to make me feel young and inspired I believe that I am now taking control and hope to be FREE soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have a dream and know what I want. Neo Tech brilliant lateral thought

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Posed By: Sue (Suelg@aol.com)

Mark - I thoroughly enjoyed Chapter 1 of The Story and look forward to reading the rest. Is it best to order from Borders?? I love kids and I self-publish books for kids to guide them with values to become healthy, productive adults. Your subject matter was of special interest.

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Posted By: Herb <Herbci@aol.com

I ENJOYED THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted By: John (inh1ts02-qfe0.ims.bt.net)

I just wanted to say that "The Story" was perhaps the cleanest, purest breath of fresh air I have ever had. I was inspired by your book. I have tried to soak up as much knowledge as I possibly can. Since reading your book I have become more positive, better rested, and my relationship with my wonderful girlfriend has improved. I am still striving for the ultimate happiness and riches, but give me time and I think I will make it. Sincerely, John

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"The Story" is a very special and wonderful masterpiece of modern literature. It shows us how we, by choosing to cut through the matrix of illusions to see what is, can start building mental puzzles of Neothink to evolve toward the God-Man. How if we can find our Friday-Night essences and become the person that we were meant to be, can live in complete happiness because then we will be value creators and value producers. I thank you Mr. Hamilton because I used to be severely trapped in the matrix of illusions, I was blind. You and your colleagues opened my eyes, and my heart. I am forever in your debt. I am on my way to finding my Friday-Night essence and discovering happiness by becoming a value creator, I can't wait to see where my personal renaissance will take me.

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Posted By: Troy H. (troy@hotmail.com)

I discovered "The Story" today on the Neo-Tech website -- and have spent the entire day immersed in it. I am now on Chapter 27, and am quite excited by what I have read!

This sounds like the solution for which I have been searching for so long...to transcend the limitations of the "ordinary" and become a "God-Man." It strikes me that, in order to present this information so clearly, you must have already attained this level yourself. How exhilarating it must be!

My wife and I have a 1-year-old daughter. We both work hard, but are struggling to "make ends meet." I have an online business, and I have been working 14-hr. days trying to make a success of it. But, it is not bringing me the level of financial success for which I had hoped. My wife and I also clean offices at night to bring in extra income. But, we are just "scraping by."

Neo-Tech and Neo-Think look and "feel" like the answer for me -- to not only provide wealth, but also lasting peace and happiness for myself and my family.

Warmly,

Troy H

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Posted By: Stewart R. (STEWARTR1@aol.com )

Thank you Mark Hamilton. The most wonderful story I have ever read. Inspirational, almost overwhelming. This story of what Neo-Tech will do for the human race must reach everyone. I can feel the genuine love that you have for each member of this human race. I know a mind could not produce such a beautiful and powerful story of what we can be, of where we can go, of where we are going, of what we will become. No words can explain my appreciation, only my actions. Every time I read Neo-Tech literature, which is almost daily now, I become armed with it's power, I thirst for more, I become more. The value of my life and all human life increases, to the point that nothing else is more important than preserving and improving all human life. What a simple concept, yet impossible task in this upside down anticivilization. Until now. Thank you Frank Wallace and Mark Hamilton for starting the Neo-Tech revolution that says no to death and yes to life. What a simple but wonderful concept. Citizens of the C of U are out here, and I return the love and passion for life that you so consistently give.

 

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Posted By: Stephen B. <mbulard@pl.net

Unbelievable. I am exhausted and elated at the same time. It's as though I've glimpsed a parallel world, like sitting on a stationary train and seeing a beautiful girl on a train parallel to mine, but on a different track. She smiles fleetingly, her train begins to pull away from mine, and she is off to a destination unknown to me. Her image will continue to haunt me.

I wonder whether I have the emotional strength to return to my job this afternoon. My job is TO WATCH PEOPLE DIE. Some slowly, others more quickly. Sometimes I can retard the process, often I can ease their pain, but the final outcome is always the same.

 

Mr. Hamilton, you have brought upon yourself a weighty mantle of responsibility to take humanity out of a long Dark Age. The world must sense its' need to evolve in the strongest possible emotional terms. I will pass "The Story" along, but more is needed. The task ahead of you and your colleagues is Herculean. But you MUST succeed. You do not have a choice. There are hundreds of us poised to help you in any way possible, but only you and Dr. Wallace can determine what, when and how that should be.

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Posted By: JANIE R. (bayarea@juno.com)

I am reading the story of Mrs. Annabelle, and it is very interesting and also sad in some parts, I have not finished reading it, but, I plan to finish. To tell you the truth, since I went to school I have never sat down and read a book, but this one is so interesting that I cannot put it down.

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Posted By: Lindon L. (lin@smartchat.net.au)

I am not normally much of a reader, but I find THE STORY hard to put down. I find it to be the most emotional thing I have ever read.

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Posted By: DD (DD815@aol.com)

Mark, that is the most touching story I have ever read and I wish with all of my heart that I could have had the privilege of that kind of informed explanation when I was growing up. Love has always been such a wonderful gift for me but I just have not had the experience of sharing with anyone the way I thought it should be. It is never too late to learn and I have learned so much from Neo-Tech. I have gained much power.

It's me again, just finished chapter 5 and I am relishing every word. It is so beautifully executed.

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Posted By: Vince G. (Grech@Partners.com.au)

The story is very well written and quite insiteful.

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Posted By:: Ralph G (galin@earthlink.net)

The "Story" captivated me and I could not stop reading. Many of my questions about life have been answered and it has opened my mind to creativity and power

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Posted By: JESAL P (plonker@hotmail.com)

Hi, my name is Jesal, I am a 15 yr. old boy from England! My brother introduced me to The Story, and I am hooked! Sadly, I have not had time to read as much as I have wanted! But, with the 9 chapters that I have read, I have been able to pierce through some of the illusions that I see! I found new answers to those questions which I have been asking myself about life!!!

I now can look at life, and give all I have to offer, and then take what is rightfully mine: a life of god, on earth!!! as a musician, I feel I can make a different set of values for the world!!! Its emotional stuff!!! The way of thinking that I have now, is top!!! It's like I have a way of seeing life before I go to live it!!! Its weird, but that's what goes on, and its really helped me

We are humans, we can be gods on earth, we can be powerful, wealthy and happy, but that's not all -- we have "super-human" powers!!! I mean that everyone of us humans is superman!!! But the thing is, it seems too good to be true, and so no one will believe it at first!!!

I am using this story to develop my way of thinking, to break through the shit in this f---ed up world, I am going to take advantage of my real human abilities, and be a real god on earth! When I have finished reading this story, I will be able to go out into the world and do all my stuff properly, because of what you have shown me, it is just sooo right!!!

I swear, I am gonna be a millionaire within 15 years time, thanx to you, and thanx to those others in the world who questioned our existence, and life, and "this society"...wicked stuff!!! Peace out man, thanx for the new ways!!!

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Posted By: Craig D (plasnt@scican.net)

I have The Book which is great but I like reading The Story as it helps to put the puzzle together.

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Posted By: Craig D (plasnt@scican.net)

I have been ready The Story! The wonderful philosophy comes across. You have shown the way.

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Posted By: Iva M.

Mark, your story is amazing and I'm only on the third chapter. Very inspiring. You really inspired me to continue the fight with DTC. We will get to the C of U someday.

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Posted By: Mark F. (marf@currantbun.com)

I find its concepts mind opening and fascinating. I am keen to embrace many of the concepts and in particular those of educating my young children (4) and (1) in the methods of integrated honesty thinking as brilliantly portrayed in The Story. Any advise on bedtime stories or other guidance would be appreciated before their pure minds become polluted with mysticism. Many thanks.

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Posted By: Dwain B (dwain@yahoo.com)

I will recommend The Story to my friends as it has touched a deep emotional chord with me and so it will with others.

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Posted By: John H

I really liked The Story. There should have been more teachers like Ms. Annabelle while I was growing up. Thanks for setting me on to something that makes sense in this weird, confusing world.

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Posted By: Dwain B (dwain@yahoo.com)

The Story is emotionally powerful and has helped me to regain my confidence. I feel empowered with the possibilities ahead of me.

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Posted By: Frank W. (raven@snydertex.com)

I just read "The Story" for the zillionth time. Excellent!!! Just exactly what is needed to understand how Neo-Tech/Neo-Think is used. As I read this, the ideas of achieving my dreams just flowed.

Thank you. Thank you. And Thank you.

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Posted By: James T (james@hotmail.com)Having read "The Story", and digested its message, I have come to a greater understanding of what has been an obsession of mine since birth, that is the meaning of our existence and the purpose for which we serve in the universe. I am only 21 years old, but I feel like I have aged a lifetime with the new ideas and methods of perception that have been hinted at and portrayed.

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Posted By: Joe (Joe@aol.com)

I enjoyed reading "The Story" more than anything I ever read. And I bet it would sincerely bring someone great pleasure as described in The Story to be among all those benevolent people creating an extraordinarily wondrous atmosphere such as that. Perhaps it could really become an actuality within my lifetime. Hopefully, one day, I can become a God-Man as well.

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Posted By: Andy P From: ANDREW POWER

Wow, I thought we had lost "The Story" from the site. I was prepared to buy it.

 

What mega values come with this story, maybe missing it of the site for a few days makes for more appreciation of these values when they are returned.

 

Thanks Mark

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Posted By: Jimmy R. (jim@publishers.org)

The book is so powerful I know my life is changing. I have affirmed that I shall live a life of total honesty with complete responsibility for self with integrity. It surely would be great if a movie was made of "The Story".

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Posted By: Robert (RobertG@aol.com)

This is the best accounting of a fictional story I've ever read. I've been an avid reader of neo-tech for about five years now, And read almost every neo-tech book available. But nothing could have prepared me for what I was about to read during The Story. I'm not completely finished with the book yet, But, when I got to the end of the twenty-ninth chapter, I felt compelled to write to you and tell you how great a value this book is to humanity. Keep up the excellent work, On creating a civilization that every body will eventually prosper from.

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Posted By: Robert A. (maxi2000@yahoo.com)

I just finished reading "The Story." It was excellent. It put Neo-Tech into the proper perspective for me. My favorite sections were the interactions between Ms. Annabelle and her young students, much like the interactions between Robin Williams and his students in "The Dead Poets Society," only much more meaningful. By the end of the second chapter I had formed in my mind what Ms. Annabelle would look like, including hair color, eye color, skin tone, height, body structure, everything. When we finally got a description of her, I couldn't believe it because except for the shade (I got the color right), of her eyes, which were darker than I imagined, I was dead on in every aspect. I was in love with Ms. Annabelle, and I longed to be in her class. I seem to be naturally drawn to Neo-Tech. When I was a young child I created my own fantasy world to protect myself from the trauma I was suffering, and that fantasy world was built on a foundation of honesty, truth, fairness, integrity, and justice. Go figure!!! The Neo Tech world is one that I would gladly embrace and fight for. I am still digging through "The Book," which I will probably be doing for some time. There is an awful lot of information to absorb. But I will keep on. Keep up the good work.

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Posted By: Mike G (mike299@hotmail.com)

I bought the book on just what the small pamphlet told me. True, I had major second thoughts about buying it, but I wanted to try it. It is now two months later and I have read through THE STORY (MAKE IT A MOVIE, MAN!!!) and over half the of the rest. When I began reading THE STORY, I was trying to loose weight, but was unlucky at all the temptations out there. Well, I have now lost a total of 17 pounds since then and it has stayed off. After reading THE STORY, I found out what I want to do. I really wanted to become a writer and inventor. I already have one book almost complete, two others in the making, and about six inventions on the drawing board. And add on top of that, I have begun reading books about QUANTUM PHYSICS! A year ago, I would not even dream of touching the complexity of it, but know, I already have a hypothesis in the works. And to top off the Sundae, I am only 21 and am working full time and going to class full time. Now that is something that I am still amazed about.

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Posted By: Robert (maximum2000@yahoo.com)

Mr. Hamilton: I have a copy of "The Book," which I am roughly half way finished with. "The Story," by the way, was great. I was in love with Miss Annabel by the end of chapter three or four. In fact, I had a vision of what she might look like, and once she was described, I was 99% correct. The only miss I had was the shade of her eyes. Not the color, just the shade. It was a strange feeling for me to have visioned her so clearly in my mind.

 

Putting the Neo-Tech vision into story form was brilliant, for it allowed me to easily understand what you are trying to accomplish. You shortened my learning curve considerably.

 

The story was a bit eerie for me because some of the things discussed have been a part of me since I was 4 or 5 years old. If I had had a teacher like Ms. Annabel, I wouldn't be 37 years old getting ready to get ready. I wouldn't be a loser!!!

Anyway, I have been perusing the Neo-tech website, and it is a great site. I just finished reading the treatise concerning our right to not incriminate ourselves. That was a great article. I am currently studying the international business information as well.

I will admit that some of the information, especially that section which replaces the biblical perspective of John with the Neo-Tech version caught me by surprise, but otherwise I have enjoyed what I have studied.

I am curious about which direction I should go once I finish "The Book." I have received several advertisements from your company to purchase other materials, each sounding better than the last, but I have no idea which direction to go. My inclination and desire is to follow up "The Book" with the publication that deals with clouding people's minds and developing wealth and love in the process. But I really unsure.

Maybe, if you have the time, you could give me your opinion, since you are in the thick of things.

By the way, I want to thank you for helping me find my "Friday Night Essence." I had never even heard of such a thing, let alone find it within myself. Since reading your material, I have nearly finished two manuscripts, and I am formulating several business ventures. I'm still working on my procrastination and my flab, but I now have a clearer vision of where my life is to go. Thank you very, very much. Finding my Friday Night Essence alone was worth the price of "The Book."

 

Thank you for your time. All my best. Until next time...

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Posted By: Pamela (goddess@earthlink.net)

Although I am still reading "the story", I find it very refreshing & I can actually see some breaking through illusions within myself as I continue to read the rest of the story. I was once like those third graders, yet there were adults who didn't give me the road map I needed, and they meant well. but their ways closed me down for a long time. thank for "the story", but I am still waiting for my "god-man" book, please send it to me soon, I've been waiting for a while! thanks

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Sent by snail mail:

First I'd just like to say that in terms of influential positive, powerful, and clearly written books, your "The Story" (the fictional accompaniment to your "God-Man -- The Next Evolution") has only 1 peer in history -- that being Rand's "Atlas Shrugged". "The Story" however, is wider-scope and (although easier for the general public to digest) more profound at the deepest levels of fully integrated honesty -- the level that as you rightly say "pulls the \91child of the past'" out from its hiding place. Through 36 chapters, there wasn't one that didn't bring tears to my eyes. In contrast "Atlas Shrugged" brought tears to my eyes in only 2 spots. Anyhow, I could go on about the incomparable value of creating a story of that magnitude and with that positive view of the future, but I'd better close for now.

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Posted By: Crystal W. (cw@mail.usask.ca)

Hi! My name is Crystal, I have read "The Story" and I think you truly have a gift for bringing about an awareness through narrative means. I'm a Canadian, 22-year-old studying Psychology and Biotechnology at the University of Saskatchewan. For years I have been confused about religion and why there are so many different perspectives. I felt lost, after reading your story along with reading Neo-Tech Discovery (I'm not finished yet) I have begun to grasp the concept of the irrational forces at work in the world. However, I sometimes now feel impatient and anxious for other people to understand what I do. I want to uncloud others like you have, but I don't know how.

Take care, Yours honestly, Crystal

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Posted By: jne

Mr. Hamilton,

After reading your first couple of chapter's on the net, I wanted to take a moment to tell you how wonderful it is. I've read the book through and have just started again for the second time. Sometimes it's hard to follow, to dig out the hidden meaning. But this is simple, fresh, and well awesome. Does it come in book form that can be ordered? If so...where can I get it? I'm sure it is hard for you to read all of your mail, it is for me and I'm not half as busy as you must be. But if you get a minute and actually read this personally, I'd love to hear from you. Thank you again.

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Posted By: Perci P <perci@yahoo.com)

First of all I have to say I have really enjoyed "The Story". I've found myself not wanting to put it down or rushing to get back to it. I haven't quite finished it yet though. I do have a question for you... I would like to know if there is anything available like the recorded lectures of Miss Annabelle or the bed time stories book she wrote. My 11 year old son has also started reading "The Story", but I would like to introduce the whole idea to my 4 year old and 14 year old (who doesn't like to read unless he has to). Do you know where I might be able to find something like that?

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Posted By: R.G. (216-119-69.o1.jps.net)

The Story gets to the essence.

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Posted By: Red (user-2igob.dialup.mindspring.com)

Brilliant Neo-Tech Story.

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Posted By: Alex A (c1139.tcma1.wa.home.com)

I read Mark Hamilton's "The Story." It's beautifully written. I was smiling one moment and choking on my tears the next - all through the novel. And it elucidated libertarian ideas beautifully. The concept of Zon and God-Man actually makes sense - a very logical conclusion about the direction a true free-market economy would take. Of course we'll all be immortal if the medical field is allowed to innovate unfettered by the government. It hurts me to realize that the government is killing my grandparents as I type this. :( So. Keep this site going.

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Posted By: Stephen (ser@hotmail.com)

Wonderful novel. This is fabulous. I have been lost in the details of work and career with little actual big success-sales work can be very tough. Finding and building one's dream gets lost in the shuffle and scuffle. I just finished Chapter 2 of "The Story", it is a wonderful way to re-cap, review, and point out the forest despite the trees for me. I feel a reawakening happening. I note the polite tact and extreme good manners of the main character. Too many people forget this sort of outward behavior. It can be very effective in dealing with those of poor character-a sort of political guerrilla people-handling tool..

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Posted By: Stephen (ser@hotmail.com)

Remarkably well written. Truly excellent. I have an M.S. and read a lot. I feel qualified to say this is a wonderfully easy to read, clear and insightful narrative. Yes. Wonderfully insightful. Remarkable. I do not now feel a need to finish my morning coffee. My brain has already just been pleasantly awakened.

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Posted By: Kathy kat@alel.net

I must say "The Story" amazes me. As closed minded as some people are today about letting go of old beliefs that no longer serve them, can you imagine what a challenge it was for Ms. Annabelle at that time? If all people had her courage, love of life, and the determination to live their truth; just imagine how wonderful the world would be. I applaud Ms. Annabelle for her courage, integrity, honesty, and most of all, her love.

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Posted By: Terrance (terrance@msn.com)

Mr. Hamilton:

I believe your conveying a very special and important message through your writings. I hope that you will always continue, even in the face of criticism from skeptics and those who would benefit from society's mindset.

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Posted By: Steven (steven64@aol.com)

I am so excited about "The Story", I am in a rush to gain as much information as quickly as possible, and can't do it quick enough. The thinking is so profound at such a deep level that I am shaken to the very core of my being. All my life I have been on a journey to discover, no indeed to create Who I Am and Who I Want To Be and to do it with integrity, honesty and with value to mankind. Though I am still in the early stages of reading I am beginning to notice a change in my thinking and the way in which I view the world. I have this profound feeling that this work will provide the shift that I have so long been searching for. It is with profound gratitude that this work has found it's way into my hands. Thank You Dr. Wallace, and Thank You Mark Hamilton.

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Posted By: Dwain B.

I love this book (The Story). I just finished reading through for the second time. I find it interesting how it seems to be a lot like a good movie seen over again. Keep up the good work, I am inspired again.

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From: Ramon Carrazco

The Story has helped me answer certain questions that I thought were realistic but other people, because of their beliefs, thought differently. I'm glad I'm not alone in this world. I always thought I was different from everybody else and yes I am different because I can see the essence of things. This world will be a whole lot better if we were all neo-thinkers. There also needs to be that diversity among the different classes of human beings on earth, I like to call it natural selection or the survival of the truly honest.

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Posted By C7jhawk@aol.com

The Story is the most stunning novel I have ever read, Mark Hamilton deserves the "Booker Prize" for creating a modern masterpiece. Literature has the power to change society for good or bad... The Story has the power to dig deep into individuals psyches and help us progress upward into a better and happier world. The one emotion that I think I took away from The Story above all others is love... a love for mans mind and what it can rise to, when freed from the constraints of an anticivilization.

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Posted By: Jim P, jp7@yahoo.com

The Story MUST be published on its own in hardback and/or paperback. That is the only hope of getting it into the hands of the general populace, particularly as word-of-mouth spreads like wildfire! The full realm of the Neo-Tech Super Society can then be understood and visualized BEFORE interested people delve into the Neo-Tech Discovery and other publications. The Story should be the MAIN FOCUS of spreading the Neo-Tech concepts. THIS IS SOOOO CRITICAL!!! The individually-bound book could be self-published and marketed by Neo-Tech, but since it has an ISBN number, it could also be requested from other bookstore outlets (Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Waldenbooks, etc.). Also....the individually bound volume should be available to order online (to fulfill immediate gratification)...that offer being made on each chapter of The Story. People trapped in the Anti-Civilization will have a MUCH greater chance of pursuing Neo-Tech discoveries and concepts AFTER reading The Story and winning them over BOTH emotionally and intellectually!!! They literally can, and do, (based on the postings I've read) begin identifying and implementing their own Friday-Night-Essence. This critical work (The Story) MUST: 1. Be published by itself. - Preferably in hardcover and soft cover. - This is the ANSWER for MASS distribution.

Many people WILL NOT sit and read lengthy material (longer than a couple of pages) on the Internet. They want to read anywhere they're sitting....in the park, at lunch, on the couch, on the patio.....anywhere NOT in front of a computer monitor. - And MANY won't have the resources to print hundreds of pages. - Plus, everyone who reads this will want to CHERISH their own personal copy and re-read it often. It will be the treasure that changes their lives forever! - It's easier to pass-on (loan or give) a copy to friends and family! 2. Be given SERIOUS consideration for producing it into a movie. - Someone should have already put a copy of it into the hands of a Spielberg, or other great Hollywood producer with a track record for so clearly portraying concepts and emotions woven so tightly together! - We need someone who isn't afraid of pushing against the Establishment, including, at times, Hollywood. 3. Be given consideration for producing it as a TV series, particularly if the movie can't be pulled-off. I want to hand this story off to my family RIGHT NOW, but they will be way too intimidated and distracted if I hand them The Book (all six books) and tell them to read only Book 2 - The Story. The sheer appearance of the HUGE volume I'd be handing them would be enough to scare them away from reading it (they would say they "don't have time" to read something that large"). If it is a bound book all-in-itself, it would be much less intimidating to the recipient. Plus, there isn't the distraction of the "God-Man" text plastered on the cover. Many people's initial reaction to the term God-Man would be one of skepticism and negativity - or the feeling that they're dealing with writings from some cult. Let them read about God-Man in The Story FIRST (with no pre-judgement of negativity) so they can understand it's integration into the whole Neo-Tech picture, THEN hit them with the God-Man/Neo-Tech literature on the web-site or through your printed publications. With this approach at least they won't think this is some new cult they have to worry about. For it seems to appear as cult-type publication on the surface (just from the "God-Man/Neo-Tech Discovery" title). "The Story" has none of this possibility of sending the wrong message. NONE AT ALL. The total simplicity in the title will DRAW people to it!! They'll have no suspicions or questions (until they get into the actual telling of the story and have had their mind and emotions enlightened)! The whole concept of the 5-minute bedtime stories about value producers intrigues me immensely! If something like that doesn't currently exist (on your web site, or others), I may begin putting it together. Short summaries of historic and current value producers that focuses on: - How they used their own independent thinking to create the values. - How they used internal authority instead of external authority to breakthrough with their advancement and values. - How each faced the battles of the anti-civilization to make their values recognized and available to others. - The end results their values have produced in each of our lives NOW. I relish researching this kind of thing!! - Apprentice matrix-destroyer.

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Posted By: Darlene T, bwconglomerate@myexcel.com

The Story was one of the most touching and enlightening piece of work I've every read.

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Posted By: Andrew A

"The Story" on the internet is mind blowing!!

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Posted By: Eric (eliy@msn.com)

I absolutely think "Neo-Tech" should stay on the web. For it was instrumental in bringing me out of the illusionary and drug-like world of religion (in my case, evangelical Protestantism). At first I actually detested and was afraid of NT and the website. But I kept coming back, almost hypnotically and out of curiosity. The turning point for me, after perusing the website for a couple of months, came when I read The Story. After devouring that, I was so emotionally stirred and intellectually stimulated that I began to seriously embrace NT and doubt all religions including my own. In fact, before being exposed to NT I was an amateur Bible scholar, historian, theologian and was planning to be become a professional theologian/pastor. Due to my enlightenment via NT, I realized that theology is just a philosophical rationalization of religion, disconnected from reality. Thank you!

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Posted By: Danny T (dtoso@sympatico.ca)

The Story clearly explains and demonstrates the value producing concepts and ideas introduced in Neo-Tech. BEAUTIFUL!!! As a proud Neo-Tech owner, I would be honored to contribute funds for a movie.

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Posted By: John M (totf@yahoo.com)

I am busy reading The Story and find that it helps me to live with a happy frame of mind, knowing that so much of what goes on in the world is merely an illusion created by government and media.

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Posted By: Tod S.

You are a fine writer, very good.

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Posted By: Jansett (rizma@aol.com)

Magnificent! I simply couldn't stop reading, chapter by chapter, even when my eyes started to tire. I'll need to go back and read The Proof again because I really can't absorb much more right now, but I want to say that The Story told the tale so powerfully that I was captivated beyond anything I've ever read before. I loved it. It was interesting to observe myself and my gut reactions as I read because I have had many similar experiences (on a less dramatic scale, perhaps, but equal emotionally) and each time felt so let down by other human beings, people who chose to go the way of power and ambition (or so they thought) at the expense of honesty and hard work.

I have been "betrayed" several times in my life, but I've kept my determination. I must admit that I was beginning to lose hope that I would ever find another human being who knew what I knew (although I have never articulated it so eloquently as The Story). I am beyond ecstatic at this moment. I am eagerly awaiting the Neo-Tech Summit in November to get the opportunity to meet other people who feel "just like me." Glorious!

The Story is great, really great. Thank you so much.

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Posted By: HORUS

BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO.

A Job, Welldone.

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Posted By: Peter A St

Dear Mark:

I am reading, perhaps, the best book that I have ever read. It's in the same category of "Gone With The Wind", "Sea Wolf", and another 101 of the World's Best Books. I am surely enjoying "The Story." More will be said upon completion.

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Posted By: Lance (Superstore@aol.com)

Hello Mark,

The Story was fabulous, it should be read by everyone. This new approach to explaining Neo Tech through fiction is a great concept, it cuts through to the essence of what Neo Tech is trying to accomplish. Also, if it is really Mark reading this email, I am very interested in joining the fight. What do I need to do to start my own Church of God-Man. I have a lot of past success in start up operations and I'm sick of reading literature, I want to take action. I live in the Seattle area and want to be apart of your team, what can I do? We are on the brink of jumping to the next evolution, I believe now is the time.

Lance

P.S. Where can I get more Neo-Tech products, I haven't seen the Neo-Tech Marketplace in a long time. I want to be able to purchase more products?

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Posted By: Beth R.

I am a long time reader and practitioner of 114 Neo-Tech Advantages. This is my second time reading "The Story" and it has renewed a passion within me that I had thought was lost. Since the events of September 11th, I have felt a void in my life. Happiness seemed unattainable anymore due to the chaotic reality of life. It was not until I reread Ms. Annabelle's encounter with the school board that I realized that life can only cause you pain as long as you inflict it upon yourself. Sure, there are maniacal people with hate in their hearts in the world but there are also beautiful souls who love and continue to produce and create values even when the world looks bleak.

I long to live purposefully by adding and creating values for others. I would love to become a teacher; to be able to enrich young lives and minds with logic and fully-integrated honesty. I would like to pursue this career but do not wish to enter the traditional public school system. Should I take Montessori Training or is there another discipline you recommend?

In the past, Neo-Tech Publishing has mentioned the creation of Neo-Tech Schools. Are there any in existence at this time? If so, where and do you have a contact? I would very much enjoy working in this type of value-productive environment.

Thank you for all your assistance.

Elizabeth

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Posted By: kiehn@bossig.com

When I was a teenager about 25 years ago someone once asked me "What is Love". At that time love was a warm feeling I felt, but I didn't know how to explain it. Over the years that question would come to mind occasionally, yet I could never put that feeling into words. Until I read this story! W0W. If I ever get the opportunity to answer that young man I'll be proud to tell him "If you Live and Love from your heart you'll find HAPPINESS!!!

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Posted By: Kozy 113@aol.com

I am the 51-year-old home-school teacher of a six-year-old girl. This is the best, most informative story for children I have ever read! It explains my thoughts, exactly, in a way much better than I could ever have done. You are a wonderful person.
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Posted By: Sean B. promithius@yahoo.com

"The Story" is now my favorite next to Ayn Rand's "Anthem" and Anne McCaffrey's Novels about "Pern", and has opened my eyes to the wonderful world that has always been in front of me. I wish Miss Annabelle were there to hold my hand, instead I was taught to use illusions to fill the gaps in my understandings. ...I remember when I was about 5-7 years old, I had run across a paradox were my existence centered around a black hole called consciousness. I was scared stiff. I had put an honest puzzle picture together that I knew nobody in my family had. I can now start my puzzles where I left off, even though the wasted years of my life have given me a limp in my path and thinking, I know that I will work it out as I reroute my life.

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Posted By: Sean B. promithius@yahoo.com

"The Story", has finally done it, I'm dumping my ego for Neo-Tech (Something felt wrong anyway.). Thank you. I'll never forget what you've done for me, let alone for the human race.

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Posted By: Hilton J. (h26-1701-140.dsl.net)

At the time I originally received a Neo-tech mailer(3-4 yrs ago), I was looking for answers and finally felt I had found them. However, I was surrounded by mysticism plagued individuals and often got discouraged or regressed back to old unproductive habits. None-the-less, I never forgot what I learned, and I always improved myself in some way shape or form after reading neo-tech material. Recently I realized I have become stagnant and was no longer moving forward as quickly as I had wanted. So I looked up Neo-tech on the web and found "The Story". I think "The Story" was a great idea and definitely made Neo-tech and Integrated thinking more easily understandable. I have already sent two teacher friends of mine this story with the intentions of raising awareness. Thank You so much.

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Posted By: Greg R. 245ot@aol.com

Neo-Tech has changed my outlook on life but I'm still having trouble applying it consistently. THE STORY is really helping me destroy integration blockers.

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Favorite Parts Thread

Posted By: Marquis de Sade (209.2.129.191)

I'm interested in hearing what those here would consider to be their favorite part of the story an why it was their favorite. What made the events you chose stand out compared to all the others?

Thanks.

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Posted By: Leon K (pw-162-64-254-254)

Hello. There wasn't any specific part that I liked best. It was more of a feeling I perceived when comprehending the beautiful values created by all of the positive characters. At the same time the outrage I felt for the abhorrent behavior of those that destroyed values. The contrast took me on an emotional roller coaster ride.

I also enjoyed greatly how the integration of the actions by the producers/creators created a kind of snowball effect of the values created.

I feel the determination to do the right thing by these characters is enlightening. ( Based on the scope of values generated) All the different levels of actions from small to big (Like Belle giving hugs to those she loved all the way to Sally's achievements)

The world is taking heed, by looking around and seeing what is happening. Every day there is some bit of news in regards to new breakthroughs in extending our life, etc... The artists coming out and creating values for the public to get with the program such as The Matrix, Devil's Advocate, Stigmata, Darwin's Conspiracy, etc...

I believe it was Ayn Rand who said she had fled Communist Russia when she saw the artists bow down to that regime.

Today the artists are singing a different tune and the world is getting better everyday, starting with YOU the individual and your choice of right and wrong and the reality of doing the right thing. Then look in the mirror and feel the Civilization of the Universe. The kingdom of heaven IS in YOU. May you all achieve the happiness that you have worked for. Kind Regards, Leon

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Posted By:

LMarquis de Sade (209.2.129.191)eon, excellent post!

So for you, you wouldn't really pick out one "favorite part", but rather it was the gestalt of many different big and little things that you liked? Do you think that this was the overall intent of the author? To create the main literary effect through the synergy of the story's various aspects?

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Posted By: Lee Holt (th-pm10-38.ision.co.uk)

For me the best part of the story is the fact that this story could be marketed through the usual channels i.e. major book publishers, and for most people would be easier to read than a lot of the neo-tech material

I think that this story may blow apart more neo cheating illusions than any other previous neo tech material

regards Lee

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Posted By: Leon K (pw-162-64-254-254)

I think his intent is to bring out the HUMAN in all of us. To see, feel, and act on the real in us. I believe The Story's objective is to set up an understanding for the masses, who get mired in over analyzing and lazily shrugging off the obvious reality. As so bluntly put "to be or not to be" :0)

Overall the work instills a hard driving determination towards a better, happier place for all.

Kind Regards, Leon.

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Posted By: Patrick (98ac57ff.ipt.aol.com)

One of my favorite parts of the story was when Jake and Jasmine met Rico at his mansion and Jake got to meet Rico's family. It inspired me to someday have a dream house like Rico's. And also it showed how much love Rico has for his kids and his family, it was touching. I also liked the reunion. It is wonderful that all the 12 students finally got together. Made me teary eyed.

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Posted By: Marquis de Sade (pppa33-resalebuffalo1-1r7306.saturn.bbn.com)

Good choices, Patrick! Those parts do indeed show the greatest strengths of MH's writing style.

I liked the parts you mentioned; very heartwarming stuff. I also liked Miss Anabelle's cellmate telling about her life. The part where they described Grassroots Charts and how it worked was pretty cool too. It was also kind of exciting when Jake was running around getting the group together. I guess those parts would be my favorites.

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Posted By: : ed (spider-tn63.proxy.aol.com)

My favorite part of "The Story", I think it's when Hammerschmidt, or whatever his name was, decides to take on Melville during his insane attempt to rape Annabelle. The crazy buffoon makes like a bull and charges with his head down to try to take out Melville, but only succeeds in killing himself. Poetic Justice.


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